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skipdaflip
post May 18 2008, 01:17 PM
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Hi there.... I'm finally back. Took me a few weeks to come back again on this site. Had to do a few things besides playing guitar... but finally I've started writing a new song.

I'll post the beginning up here, cause I'm happy with it. Maybe somebody can think with me about the lyrics:

Baring Pain


Deep inside me,
there’s a will to survive
With the pain in my heart,
that belongs to someone else

I will take this baring pain
to a place where it can hide
Away from all the suffering
Away from all the sin and lies

Scars are made in my heart
Scars are made in my soul
Take the pain and lead away
Take it far and let it go


I Lighten the weight,
took the load of my back
I cleared the mind
Left the demons from the past

It can’t be wrong
To take a view from another site
I will be strong
But need strength to survive

Scars are made in my heart
Scars are made in my soul
Take the pain and lead away
Take it far and let it go


[Lyrics and song(mp3) has been edited]

[This if the Full Version of the song]


Audiopaal... I checked your song and I liked it. (But to be honest, I liked your playing in the old one better).

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post May 18 2008, 02:28 PM
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Nice song skip smile.gif
This one could turn out really good..

Ok, I'll listen to the old one and try to do something similar then smile.gif
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post May 18 2008, 02:35 PM
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QUOTE (audiopaal @ May 18 2008, 03:28 PM) *
Nice song skip smile.gif
This one could turn out really good..

Ok, I'll listen to the old one and try to do something similar then smile.gif


Hey Audiopaal... It's good to hear from you again. So you like this song so far?
Great... I'm writing the lyrics atm... so that I know where to go to!
Do you like the voice and lyrics too?


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post May 18 2008, 02:49 PM
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QUOTE (skipdaflip @ May 18 2008, 03:35 PM) *
Hey Audiopaal... It's good to hear from you again. So you like this song so far?
Great... I'm writing the lyrics atm... so that I know where to go to!
Do you like the voice and lyrics too?


Yes I do, it's really good smile.gif
I like the voice and lyrics too very much <.9

Something in the sound is clipping or making a buzz a few places though, but that can be fixed smile.gif

What drums are you using? They're awesome smile.gif
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post May 18 2008, 02:57 PM
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QUOTE (audiopaal @ May 18 2008, 03:49 PM) *
Yes I do, it's really good smile.gif
I like the voice and lyrics too very much <.9

Something in the sound is clipping or making a buzz a few places though, but that can be fixed smile.gif

What drums are you using? They're awesome smile.gif


The buzz is probably the lyrics I've recorded. I recorded in 2 times and paste it on each other. I just recorded the lyrics again in 1 piece. I'll upload that version up here.

I use EZdrummer with the Drumkit from Hell expansion pack.

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post May 18 2008, 03:07 PM
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I'll listen to the new upload also then smile.gif

Ok, nice smile.gif
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post May 19 2008, 01:57 AM
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Cool song!!


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post May 19 2008, 09:25 AM
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nice composing and good lyrics i like the it


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post May 19 2008, 02:06 PM
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Well, I've added a new part into the song and recorded the lyrics again. This time the lyrics are a bit clearer so that you can hear the words I'm singing better. (Better then last part).
It's not without any mistakes yet... but it's getting it's shape!

The song3 is replaced with baring pain.mp3

Check it out!

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post May 19 2008, 03:42 PM
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Very good! smile.gif
You have definetly improved on many fields since the first uploads, especially timing.


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post May 19 2008, 04:33 PM
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QUOTE (Trond Vold @ May 19 2008, 04:42 PM) *
Very good! smile.gif
You have definetly improved on many fields since the first uploads, especially timing.


Thanxz Trond... It's good to hear I make progression... That's the reason I love GMC that much...
I'm still learning and think it will keep that way!
Thanxz for your compliments!


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• Some kind of cheap Guitar...

Amps:
MARSHALL JTM30

Guitar Gear:
Line6 X3 Live
Boss AC-3

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post May 19 2008, 07:58 PM
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The song is finished and posted up here...
[Song posted 19-05-2008 21:02]


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post May 19 2008, 10:27 PM
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Wow, awesome skip smile.gif
This was really really good, you've improved a lot smile.gif
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post May 20 2008, 05:25 AM
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QUOTE (audiopaal @ May 19 2008, 11:27 PM) *
Wow, awesome skip smile.gif
This was really really good, you've improved a lot smile.gif


Thnxz Audiopaal... hope to record something heavier next time! biggrin.gif


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• Some kind of cheap Guitar...

Amps:
MARSHALL JTM30

Guitar Gear:
Line6 X3 Live
Boss AC-3

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Roland HP203-ERW
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post May 20 2008, 07:11 AM
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QUOTE (skipdaflip @ May 20 2008, 06:25 AM) *
Thnxz Audiopaal... hope to record something heavier next time! biggrin.gif


I'm working on a heavy-metal song right now actually, hope it'll turn out the way I want it too smile.gif
I'm also working on another pop song, and that'll probably be my best yet (I hope!) tongue.gif

I'd love to hear some of your heavy stuff when you record it smile.gif
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