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post May 20 2008, 12:05 AM
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post May 20 2008, 09:56 AM
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nice wiki superize

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post May 22 2008, 01:36 PM
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I`ll give this one a 3

I think you`ve got enough content in there to turn this into at least a "4" but the layout for me lost you a point, try breaking it up a little with some extra headings "History" "The beginnings" etc that kind of thing, it`d make it a better read

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