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post May 23 2008, 01:05 AM
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ok i redid it a little, got some more from muris himself wink.gif

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Hisham Al-Sanea
post May 23 2008, 09:34 AM
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nice Wiki and more info about GMC instructor Muris

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post May 23 2008, 10:19 AM
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Ok, I really like the "other info" with a kind of little interview answer from Muris, liked that a lot.

This article started as a 3 I`m going to give you an extra point turning it into a 4.

I still think theres points that you`ve kept to a bare minimum, for example, Endorsement section, I`ve heard of his endorsee`s but look at it from the view point of someone reading it that hasnt, just a couple of lines to say that Stan Hinesly endorses Muris, he designs custom pickups which he tailored for Muris`s own personal sound, a link to the website, and do something like that for each one, shredneck etc, tell us very quickly what it is, thats the difference from a bare bones article and a fact filled informative article.

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