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> Very First Upload, My first try at Muris Jazz Rythm and Solo lesson
Torben
post May 24 2008, 09:40 AM
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Here's my first (or actually second) take, where I play Muris Jazz Rythm and the beginner solo upon it. Still a few mistakes in both, and I haven't made any modifications mixer wise. Please give some feedback.
I'm a beginner / intermediate, so please be patient with me. But constructive critisism is much appreciated.

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post May 24 2008, 09:56 AM
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Nice take man. Great sound and feel smile.gif What kind of guitar do you use?
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post May 24 2008, 10:01 AM
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It's my Martin...I went acoustic, so I didn't wake up my family! smile.gif

And thanks a lot for the nice words!
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post May 24 2008, 10:03 AM
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Nice job Torben, i loved the rythm guitar, the solo was nice too but a little sharp edges here and there.


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Hisham Al-Sanea
post May 24 2008, 10:04 AM
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nice take Torben


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Torben
post May 24 2008, 10:11 AM
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Thank's a lot guy's!

Siggum: I really appreciate your comment. I suppose you refer to my somewhat unsteady play? Sometimes I kinda loose the thread?

I'll practice some more and give it a new try. Then upload it again. could be interesting to hear if I can improve.
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post May 24 2008, 10:22 AM
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It's great biggrin.gif
hwever the tone in the solo is too much slappy


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post May 24 2008, 10:41 AM
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QUOTE (Torben @ May 24 2008, 11:01 AM) *
It's my Martin...I went acoustic, so I didn't wake up my family! smile.gif

And thanks a lot for the nice words!


okay wink.gif
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post May 24 2008, 01:16 PM
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Well done, Torben. I like your sound. With a little more practice I'm sure it will sound very professional. Looking forward to hearing the next upload.

Cheers.
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post May 25 2008, 03:15 AM
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I like your playing and that you used your Martin. My only suggestion is to use a little lees of the compressor. It will make things sound more natural and warmer,

Just a thought. Great job smile.gif


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