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so here we go
https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/wiki/index.php/Nirvana

took me quite a lot of time to put it together...

hope for a good grade wink.gif

hope you like it

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Nirvana are my favourite band ever. I would have loved to have done this article as I know everything about them but you did a pretty good job. I think you should try and tidy it up a bit with more paragraphs to make it look neater and there are a few details missing here or there but overall a great job I think.


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hey! nice to hear you
i really appreciate your critizism - thanks man smile.gif

i already did tidy up the biography xD - but - there are still so many facts that have to be in there sad.gif
would you mind to help me little by telling what to add / delete, or said more sharply whats missing in your eyes? wanna make a great arcticle this time smile.gif

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I'd say just mention a bit more about 2 things. MTV Unplugged which is seen by many to be the greatest mtv unplugged performance and also there show at Reading 92 which is continually voted by many magazines as the best gig ever. The first Kurt demo was called Organized Confusion and hence my name and he wanted to call his band that but it never happened.

You did a great job anyway so I wouldn't worry too much about additional details. Just try and make it a little tidier or I will after you get your grading.


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he thank you very much smile.gif
gonna add something and in contrary delete some "unnessesary sad.gif " details of their biography...

@andrew... please w8 with grading until I fixed it;)
I write another post in this thread if I've done. thank you


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Also add to the discrography Incesticide which isn't in there. Nirvana (Best Of), Sliver (The Best of the Box Set) and With The Lights Out (The Nirvana Box Set)


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Nice one fire!, lots of info there, good job wink.gif


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nice Wiki about Nirvana also it has a good history and information .good work mate


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so it's done smile.gif
fixed:
subtitles in history section
added a Reading '92 section
added some missing recordings to the discography under Missceallaneous

thanks guys for all this critizism - helped me quite a lot to improve my arcticle

@andrew: feel free to grade it now wink.gif thanks

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I think this is a definite 5 or even 5+ smile.gif It looks a lot better now. Good job smile.gif Now you just need to wait and see what Andrew thinks smile.gif

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QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ May 27 2008, 06:26 PM) *
I think this is a definite 5 or even 5+ smile.gif It looks a lot better now. Good job smile.gif Now you just need to wait and see what Andrew thinks smile.gif


it's a honor for me to hear this from the "ultimative-nirvana-fan" biggrin.gif
thanks again wink.gif
gonna wait for andrey's grading now;)


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I`ll grade this one for you Fire smile.gif

It couldnt possibly be anything less than a 5+!! Good reading and full of facts in every detail, not a band I`m that familiar with history wise but after reading your article I know an awful lot more , excellent, well done! smile.gif

Theres a few typos in there, nothing major, I`d have corrected them as went but I wanted to read through it and grade it for you, maybe OC can have another breeze through it when he gets the chance and help out with a few of the spellings smile.gif

Well done again

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Yeah. Now you have your 5+ grading biggrin.gif if you want I will go through and check for typos and spelling errors to make the article perfect smile.gif


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QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ May 28 2008, 09:42 AM) *
Yeah. Now you have your 5+ grading biggrin.gif if you want I will go through and check for typos and spelling errors to make the article perfect smile.gif


yeah now im happy xD
im always thankfull for any corrections of my english, as it's not as good as it should be.
I always ask myself whether it is awful to read what non-native english speaker have written as a native-speaker biggrin.gif ?
But I'm giving my best - though without online-dictionaries I could not write anything tongue.gif


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QUOTE (fire @ May 28 2008, 05:10 PM) *
I always ask myself whether it is awful to read what non-native english speaker have written as a native-speaker biggrin.gif ?


No not at all Fire, your english is very good indeed and to write the way you do is nothing short of excellent!

I`m disappointed with myself that I could not possibly do what you did in another language, so dont put yourself down, whats the odd typo/misspelling amongst friends? smile.gif


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Yeah. The English was fine and I understand everything you say. I started editing it for spellings and what not but haven't got round to it yet but I will carry on tomoz and finish it off. Again thanks for the great article.


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QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ May 28 2008, 11:01 PM) *
Yeah. The English was fine and I understand everything you say. I started editing it for spellings and what not but haven't got round to it yet but I will carry on tomoz and finish it off. Again thanks for the great article.


he thanks for correctiong.
Im very sorry for the missspellings but I only have a german spellchecker and this one won't help here I think. laugh.gif
Though I'll work on that for my next article wink.gif
stay tuned, its gonna be about bob dylan or beatles, have started them both a little, but school + guitar + piano takes its time tongue.gif

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