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The Uncreator
post May 30 2008, 12:52 AM
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I redid this one, Added all the ideas i had for it. The solo is actually improv, And i decided to keep it, Cause i thought it was cool. Anyway, Just let me know what you think of where im going.

Im gonna add some drums too, when I get time I don't make them suck

PS, Its a bit lengthy, 9:02 long, And it took about that long to upload laugh.gif
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post May 30 2008, 01:06 AM
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nice job its goes from middle eastern to metal. with drums it will kick
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post May 30 2008, 01:07 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ May 29 2008, 03:52 PM) *
I redid this one, Added all the ideas i had for it. The solo is actually improv, And i decided to keep it, Cause i thought it was cool. Anyway, Just let me know what you think of where im going.

Im gonna add some drums too, when I get time.



Amazing! What more is there to say?

Id like to hear you add the vocals and sing though ? cool.gif

Well Done Brett, as usual dry.gif Do bad for once so I can tell you how much you suck ! Im starting to think your like Muris's second account laugh.gif


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post May 30 2008, 02:05 AM
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Id love to add vocals, I just need a mic.

Ill start programming the drums tomorrow, But since im drum retarded, It will take me like 3 days laugh.gif


Thanks for the comments guys smile.gif
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post May 30 2008, 03:52 AM
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Like I said before, I love the riffage biggrin.gif. However I think your distorted guitars could do with some panning. Right now they sound pretty bunched up in the middle and widening it up abit can do wonders. For example, in the part that starts at about 1:30 try recording the guitar that just plays the chords twice and pan those two hard left and right and keep the other guitar in the middle, that should give you a much bigger sound.

Same goes for the verse, if you haven't done so already then record it twice and pan those babies for that extra metal sound!


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post May 30 2008, 07:33 AM
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Sounds good, looking forward to hear it with drums smile.gif
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Wow, Uncreator... I'm also looking forward to hear this one with drums... but also with the lyrics!


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post May 30 2008, 07:37 PM
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QUOTE (Smurkas @ May 29 2008, 06:52 PM) *
Like I said before, I love the riffage biggrin.gif. However I think your distorted guitars could do with some panning. Right now they sound pretty bunched up in the middle and widening it up abit can do wonders. For example, in the part that starts at about 1:30 try recording the guitar that just plays the chords twice and pan those two hard left and right and keep the other guitar in the middle, that should give you a much bigger sound.

Same goes for the verse, if you haven't done so already then record it twice and pan those babies for that extra metal sound!


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Alright, Ill try that out, and see how it goes wink.gif
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post May 30 2008, 08:30 PM
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nice middle eastern intro version mate


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post May 31 2008, 06:20 PM
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Alright, Theres a new file up now, And its the finished version, for guitars anyway

Its a bit longer now......Just by a "tad"
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post Jun 1 2008, 01:20 AM
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Awesome, all I can say is awesome smile.gif
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post Jun 1 2008, 01:49 AM
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Where do you draw all this inspiration from man? Another great upload! smile.gif


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post Jun 1 2008, 01:51 AM
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sweet....sounds very nice, i like it alot

was all this done on reaper?


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post Jun 1 2008, 08:35 AM
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WOW sounds really good, lovely-exotic melodies here wink.gif
BTW is too long and without drums, bass or vocals it's seems more long tongue.gif


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post Jun 1 2008, 02:36 PM
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QUOTE (skennington @ May 31 2008, 04:49 PM) *
Where do you draw all this inspiration from man? Another great upload! smile.gif

This particular one came from a series of books I read called "The Eyes Of God" by John Marco.


QUOTE (Outlaw2112 @ May 31 2008, 04:51 PM) *
sweet....sounds very nice, i like it alot

was all this done on reaper?


Yeah, I did everything on reaper and with a Pod X3 Live

QUOTE (Juan M. Valero @ May 31 2008, 11:35 PM) *
WOW sounds really good, lovely-exotic melodies here wink.gif
BTW is too long and without drums, bass or vocals it's seems more long tongue.gif


God I know, I want to add drums, bass and vocals, so it doesn't seem like it laugh.gif
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post Jun 1 2008, 03:59 PM
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Great peace man.Cant wait to here with all the instruments.


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post Jun 2 2008, 10:20 AM
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Very nice indeed Brett - well done!:D

Also I was thinking - since your lyrics are really colorful you could probably get away just reading them over some of the riffs with an emotional voice and maybe some effect added to it. It could make it even more interesting.


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post Jun 2 2008, 04:43 PM
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Love the feeling that you put in this song smile.gif
The intro sounds so exotic, Well done !

I'm also looking forward to hear it with some Drums tongue.gif
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post Jun 3 2008, 07:01 PM
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Very powerful! I like this heavy shit. How long are you playing?

With Drums it will sound even better.
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post Jun 7 2008, 09:57 PM
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hmm I can't find the link to listen to the song ?


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