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Smurkas
post Jun 4 2008, 02:16 AM
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Hey guys! Here comes a new metal song I recorded recently biggrin.gif. I was a bit eager when recording it so I hadn't rehearsed the song 100% so there's a couple of small (and not so small tongue.gif) mistakes in there. I know I have to redo the acoustic guitar in the verse and probably redo the main riff as well. Also this version tunes out during the bridge so it is of course missing the solo/outro.

Anyways I want to know what you think of the song! Any comments about sound/riffage/structure/etc is more than welcome!

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post Jun 4 2008, 06:10 AM
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Wow,,great man!!! smile.gif You haw so many good ideas in this song.
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Hisham Al-Sanea
post Jun 4 2008, 11:40 PM
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nice and good work in this track. i think if you can re-mix it down again it will be more balanced


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post Jun 5 2008, 05:37 AM
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Thanks for the comments biggrin.gif. Hisham could you tell me what you think is out of balance in the song? Are the instrument levels wrong or is it too loud? If you could give me an explanation I would be very grateful.


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post Jun 7 2008, 02:09 PM
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Clean intro guitar is little thin. Riffs are great, sound excellent. That clean guitar line over the riffs sounds a little strange to me don't know why.. Drum work is also very good, some velocity programming couldn't hurt. All in all great.


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post Jun 7 2008, 05:45 PM
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It's really good. Nice song smile.gif
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post Jun 7 2008, 09:44 PM
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Great ideas man ! Really cool song smile.gif


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post Jun 7 2008, 10:22 PM
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QUOTE (Smurkas @ Jun 5 2008, 07:37 AM) *
Thanks for the comments biggrin.gif. Hisham could you tell me what you think is out of balance in the song? Are the instrument levels wrong or is it too loud? If you could give me an explanation I would be very grateful.


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first much reverb in clean guitar and high volume in power drive guitar then after that i felt
clean guitar at once going for a high volume so upi have first
to balance the drums with the bass guitar then after that the drive to be suitable with
the drums and the bass and the clean guitar to be surrounder . dont surround any
instruments playing fast but you can balance its as a left /right


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