Reply to this topicStart new topic
> The Perfect Murder
Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Jun 9 2008, 03:17 AM
Post #1


GMC:er
*

Group: Members
Posts: 2.412
Joined: 23-February 07
From: New york
Member No.: 1.243





Her sins, never forgiven
Words, never said.
Feelings, never put forth.
Shes better off dead.

We lay, in the bed tonight.
As I talk to her one final time.
Ive been planning this for far to long,
Now shes mine, all mine.

Her body remains cold.
As I cuddle her for body heat.
The rain falls gently,
As I tickle her little feet.

If only she wasnt a liar.
She was truthful and polite.
Maybe then I wouldnt get the gun,
And end her life tonight.

As I mustered up the courage, I finally pulled the trigger.
I decided one last drink would do.
As I took a shot of liquor.

I reached down to hug her,
As she stiffly layed on the bed.
I slowly motioned to kiss her,
But she wouldnt move her head.

I tryed to awaken my lovely wife,
Tell her to get up.
But my wife didnt make any sounds.
She wasnt going to turn around.

I looked back at my girl.
My wife, my baby, my friend.
I guess when we got married...
It was the beginning of the end.

My job now done.
It was great, easily admitted.
As I sat there admiring...
The Perfect Murder I commited.

© John Minoia 2008

This post has been edited by Eat-Sleep-andJam: Jun 10 2008, 12:48 PM


--------------------
Join Me On the Lyrics Board !


"Find something worth dying for...



...And live for it"
-The Uncreator
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
The Uncreator
post Jun 9 2008, 03:56 AM
Post #2


Fire Up The Blades, Moderator
Group Icon

Group: GMC Senior
Posts: 8.933
Joined: 6-March 07
From: St. Petersburg, Florida
Member No.: 1.304



Very dark and vivid, It reminds me of the movie Mr. Brooks. Was this one inspired by anything particular?
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Jun 9 2008, 12:37 PM
Post #3


GMC:er
*

Group: Members
Posts: 2.412
Joined: 23-February 07
From: New york
Member No.: 1.243



The movie Fracture.

biggrin.gif Thanks for the feedback


--------------------
Join Me On the Lyrics Board !


"Find something worth dying for...



...And live for it"
-The Uncreator
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
Nemanja Filipovi...
post Jun 9 2008, 12:43 PM
Post #4


Singing Instructor
Group Icon

Group: GMC Instructor
Posts: 3.391
Joined: 23-January 08
Member No.: 3.960



Great story man.smile.gif


--------------------
Check out my video lessons and instructor board!

Participate im my new Crazy Blues Collaboration
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Jun 9 2008, 12:49 PM
Post #5


GMC:er
*

Group: Members
Posts: 2.412
Joined: 23-February 07
From: New york
Member No.: 1.243



QUOTE (Nemanja Filipovic @ Jun 9 2008, 03:43 AM) *
Great story man.smile.gif



Thanks Nemanja smile.gif


--------------------
Join Me On the Lyrics Board !


"Find something worth dying for...



...And live for it"
-The Uncreator
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post

Fast ReplyReply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:

 


RSS Lo-Fi Version Time is now: 15th December 2017 - 03:04 PM