The Perfect Murder
Eat-Sleep-andJam
Jun 9 2008, 03:17 AM
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Her sins, never forgiven
Words, never said.
Feelings, never put forth.
Shes better off dead.

We lay, in the bed tonight.
As I talk to her one final time.
Ive been planning this for far to long,
Now shes mine, all mine.

Her body remains cold.
As I cuddle her for body heat.
The rain falls gently,
As I tickle her little feet.

If only she wasnt a liar.
She was truthful and polite.
Maybe then I wouldnt get the gun,
And end her life tonight.

As I mustered up the courage, I finally pulled the trigger.
I decided one last drink would do.
As I took a shot of liquor.

I reached down to hug her,
As she stiffly layed on the bed.
I slowly motioned to kiss her,
But she wouldnt move her head.

I tryed to awaken my lovely wife,
Tell her to get up.
But my wife didnt make any sounds.
She wasnt going to turn around.

I looked back at my girl.
My wife, my baby, my friend.
I guess when we got married...
It was the beginning of the end.

My job now done.
It was great, easily admitted.
As I sat there admiring...
The Perfect Murder I commited.

© John Minoia 2008

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Jun 9 2008, 03:56 AM
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Very dark and vivid, It reminds me of the movie Mr. Brooks. Was this one inspired by anything particular?

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Jun 9 2008, 12:37 PM
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The movie Fracture.

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Jun 9 2008, 12:43 PM
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Great story man.smile.gif

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Jun 9 2008, 12:49 PM
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QUOTE (Nemanja Filipovic @ Jun 9 2008, 03:43 AM) *
Great story man.smile.gif



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