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post Jun 9 2008, 01:10 PM
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These are some lyrics I just wrote. I just lost all my ideas lyrically. I'm in a void at the minute. I feel I have no friends. This is about losing your friends and praying to the stars for salvation and maybe you can't get what you want but when the time comes to move on then you will get the salvation you need and your friends will be waiting for you. They would wait as long as it took for you to come back as you are loved. Give things time and always get the most from life and eventually you'll get your reward. You will die a happy man and what more can you ask for. Happiness is the key to life. It may not be easy to find but there are people out there that are destined to help you in life. You just need to find them and you will find them it's just a case of time.

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The Stars Will Fall From The Sky Tonight
Crashing Waves On Mankind
We ask the stars for guidance
But maybe they can't hear our pleas
A shooting star I wish upon
Offering no salvation to me

I walk the lonely path
It seems it's set out for me
To walk the lonely path
Is to spend time with the spirits
They shall hear your calls
They shall feel your anguish
Share with them and the lights
That once scorched your eyes
Shall shine in your direction
An offering from the good hearted

The Stars Will Fall From The Sky Tonight
Crashing meteors on our beloved plains
We plough the fields to feed the young
But maybe the young Shall die alone
In our arms, in our hearts, in our minds
We offer them the salvation they need

In the friends you keep near
Why can they feel the stars
Why can they get the fulfillment you desire
You don't feel the stars power
Your desire to feel remorse
To show Regret
You can not seek Absolution from the stars
Your sins can't be shed
But you have your friends
They passed on in your childhood

You loved your friends
But they died in your childhood
Yet You always know they are there
They love and miss you
And they are always with you
You will see them again
And they will forever remember you
As you are a part of them
They feel lost without you
It is your time to pass on
Know you were loved
And you shall be set free
The Stars Are there for you
You know they are now

This will be our salvation
We need the stars
We need forgiveness
The rays of the sun shall fall on you tonight
You are special in another man's heart
You are loved in another woman's destiny
They will guide you as you deserve salvation
You are the one that holds the key
And you will be allowed to go free
You died when finding salvation
You died a happy man

The stars will fall from the sky tonight
As another loved child dies in the arms of their friends
You shed a tear and you know you lived life
The time is right to go. May you rest in peace

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post Jun 9 2008, 03:18 PM
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Pretty damn good lyrics man, I particularly like the reference to stars (Maybe cause I have some sort of space fetish laugh.gif ) And the structure is really good, very old school death metal feel in the way the lyrics come off, or even a bit of progressive metal as well, If not just as much.

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post Jun 9 2008, 08:32 PM
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Yeah it was really good.
You should start posting more smile.gif


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post Jun 9 2008, 08:38 PM
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Awesome lyrics mate smile.gif


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post Jun 9 2008, 09:10 PM
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post Jun 9 2008, 11:26 PM
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i like it .nice lyrics


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post Jun 10 2008, 12:21 AM
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Thank you all. It means a lot to me as lyrics are so key to my songs. You need to feel the lyrics you write. I was tearful when i wrote these but they are about hope. If you have hope then you will find love and salvation. People care about you. For all those depressed, phone your friends and talk with them and they will be there for you. You may abandon your own happiness but your mates are there to make sure you have a great life. People on here deserve a great life and i wish everyone all the best.

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