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post Jun 10 2008, 07:10 PM
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For Cassie- Feel better and dont worry things will be alright.- Your Friend,~ John

Verse 1:
Im over here.
Shes over there,
No one listens,
No one cares.

Shes upset,
Broken down.
But she remains ready,
For another round.

He takes advantage,
Plays with her heart,
I feel her pain,
And were miles apart.

Chorus: As she sits in the bathroom,
With that kitchen knife,
She admires the hate, for her own life.

So she slits her wrists,
As she silently cries,
The tears fall out of her big brown eyes.

She wishes things were different,
Mom and Dad got back together,
Maybe then all these thigs would be,
A litte bit better.

Once those cuts are made, and her arms are now scratched.
The people she once loved, are no longer attached.
The beauty that surronds her, remains her domain.
As she lives her life, in this never ending pain.


Verse 2: There was one that was there to the end,
Until the day he decided not to be her friend.
There is one that cares the most,
Shows her compassion when she needs it the most.

He drys her tears when shes feeling bad,
And holds the girl when shes feeling sad.
Through thick and thin he cares the most,
Shadows her like hes her ghost.

Chorus: As she sits in the bathroom,
With that kitchen knife,
She admires the hate, for her own life.

So she slits her wrists,
As she silently cries,
The tears fall out of her big brown eyes.

She wishes things were different,
Mom and Dad got back together,
Maybe then all these thigs would be,
A litte bit better.

Once those cuts are made, and her arms are now scratched.
The people she once loved, are no longer attached.
The beauty that surronds her, remains her domain.
As she lives her life, in this never ending pain.

Verse 3:
Through all the drugs, and the neglect.
She always manages to redirect,

And as she learns, all about life.
She stops, thinks,
And drops the knife.


________________Copyright: John Minoia 2008


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post Jun 10 2008, 07:23 PM
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wow man! it´s so painful.... i love it.... wink.gif


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post Jun 10 2008, 07:36 PM
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Another awesome lyrics man, so good... so scary though...



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post Jun 10 2008, 09:24 PM
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Very well done man, I know someone like this as well, You really got the pain out there and made it accessible to the reader, and the rhyme scheme worked great.
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post Jun 10 2008, 09:53 PM
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QUOTE (Lian Gerbino @ Jun 10 2008, 10:23 AM) *
wow man! it´s so painful.... i love it.... wink.gif

Thankyou smile.gif

QUOTE (Fran @ Jun 10 2008, 10:36 AM) *
Another awesome lyrics man, so good... so scary though...

That was how it was intended, glad is spooked you biggrin.gif

QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jun 10 2008, 12:24 PM) *
Very well done man, I know someone like this as well, You really got the pain out there and made it accessible to the reader, and the rhyme scheme worked great.


Yeah Thanks, This is about a real girl that I know. She was talking about her rough times and I wrote this to make her feel better. Sadly, the kitchen knife part is real dry.gif .


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