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SonofDestiny
post Jun 12 2008, 06:29 PM
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Hey people,

This is the first song that I've ever written. Well, not completely, I mean, you're always adding and removing stuff, but this was my first idea. smile.gif

I really need feedback and I'm willing to try anything to make this song perfect, so bring on the criticism biggrin.gif
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post Jun 12 2008, 06:32 PM
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good first song man! keep it up


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post Jun 12 2008, 06:56 PM
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This would sound so cool if the instruments are live.
Great job man.smile.gif


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post Jun 12 2008, 07:07 PM
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Nice song. smile.gif I'd love to hear a recording of it.

Happy Birthday btw biggrin.gif

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post Jun 12 2008, 08:53 PM
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great work here in Gp5 file.


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post Jun 13 2008, 11:01 PM
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You should definitly try to record this ! smile.gif


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post Jun 14 2008, 12:28 PM
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Thanks biggrin.gif

Any ideas for vocals? I have no idea how to put words and melodies to this song. When you hear this song, what do you think it could be about?


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post Jun 14 2008, 12:31 PM
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QUOTE (SonofDestiny @ Jun 14 2008, 01:28 PM) *
Thanks biggrin.gif

Any ideas for vocals? I have no idea how to put words and melodies to this song. When you hear this song, what do you think it could be about?

I can help you with that,I could record the vocals for you.If you like of course.:)Or I could hlp you do it your self.


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post Jun 15 2008, 02:56 PM
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Ohh that would be awesome! I could really use an example biggrin.gif


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post Jun 15 2008, 06:09 PM
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Great first song man!!!


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