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post Jun 14 2008, 10:57 AM
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Hi guys,

After being kind of busy the last weeks and not having the chance to play guitar as much as i would have liked, i finally have a few days off and grabbed my guitar to continue where i stopped.

To come back in the right spirit, something rock can not be wrong i have thought, so i tried Muris great "Rocking Tune" intermediate level Lesson and i'm quite happy about this take. It's maybe not perfect, but i like the aggressive, straight forward sound of this take and i decided to share this one with you.

This take is in 120 bpm and i have modified a few notes here and there.

I hope you like it and i'm of course curious about everybody's opinion.

Attached File  Rocking_Tune_Intermediate_05___Medium.avi ( 7.12MB ) Number of downloads: 300


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post Jun 14 2008, 11:00 AM
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Werce plying dude smile.gif

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post Jun 14 2008, 11:03 AM
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Awsome dude, great vibrato and feel, there where very few timing issues but its really minor details, you nailed it with your own touch, good job smile.gif


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post Jun 14 2008, 11:17 AM
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great take man,you haw good control over your instrument.


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post Jun 14 2008, 11:37 AM
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Thank you Superize and Nemanja ..

QUOTE (Siggum @ Jun 14 2008, 12:03 PM) *
..., there where very few timing issues but its really minor details, ...


Hi Siggum, thank you for pointing out the timing issues .. could you please tell which parts you have noticed being off timing? This would help me to work on this ... Thanks!


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post Jun 14 2008, 12:03 PM
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QUOTE (wrk @ Jun 14 2008, 12:37 PM) *
Thank you Superize and Nemanja ..



Hi Siggum, thank you for pointing out the timing issues .. could you please tell which parts you have noticed being off timing? This would help me to work on this ... Thanks!


Sure man, but notice i said minor so its not like you made any huge bloopers laugh.gif between 14-17 secs, your a little ahead of the beat, same with 21-23 secs, nothing to worry about though its minor, and the rest is played super tight.


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post Jun 14 2008, 12:10 PM
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great feel, nice vintage style guitar too!

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post Jun 14 2008, 12:23 PM
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QUOTE (Siggum @ Jun 14 2008, 01:03 PM) *
Sure man, but notice i said minor so its not like you made any huge bloopers laugh.gif between 14-17 secs, your a little ahead of the beat, same with 21-23 secs, nothing to worry about though its minor, and the rest is played super tight.


Thank you Siggum, true .. it sounds a bit like if i need a moment to come in move there at the beginning .. huh.gif
Haha, the huge "bloopers" i try to keep for myself, but i do them quite often.





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post Jun 15 2008, 06:12 PM
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GREAT! smile.gif


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post Jun 15 2008, 09:28 PM
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That was GREAT!! I loved the way you handled your bends and vibrato. Your tone was also very nice.


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post Jun 15 2008, 10:12 PM
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awesome take wrk. u have great vibrato
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post Jun 16 2008, 12:54 AM
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That was really good! smile.gif

Nice vibrato and feel.
Some minor timing-problems though, well.. not sure i will call it timing, it's more like you need to just tighten the playing up a bit on those sections Siggum mentioned.


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post Jun 16 2008, 10:59 AM
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WOW, amazing mate !!!! really great playing and amazing sound !! just say it's high class stuff wink.gif

Muris will be happy with your take smile.gif


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post Jun 16 2008, 11:38 AM
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Thank you Trond, yes .. it has to be more tight. With 16th notes at 120 bpm i reach my limit when it comes to alternate picking. I do a lot of exercises in alt. picking and i feel it becomes more solid, but i don't manage to gain some speed. Speed is not my main goal, but when i play on my limits it will not be tight of cause. That bugs me since a while..
Your Picking Exercise lesson is part of my practice routine as it's kind of straight 16th notes, with some 16th triplet's here and there. Hope this will improve my right hand. I will ask some further question in your board about picking .. get prepared smile.gif


Thanks Juan .. it would be great if Muris will have the time to listen to this take, but first of all he should have a great time in London. I get some great advices from you guys as well ..


Thank you Pablo, UncleSkillet and Nick ..





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post Jun 16 2008, 11:45 AM
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Awesome playing mate smile.gif I'm currently working on this tune myself smile.gif


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post Jun 16 2008, 09:12 PM
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Excellent work man!

This is what i am talking about when i say you need to have attitude in your playing. Sure from a critique standpoint there are some issues, but.... from a listeners standpoint they would never notice! When you play with attitude like that it comes across and makes you tap your foot and be like....ahhh yah rip it dude!

Keep it up man you have alot of attitude in your playing, i love it!


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post Jun 17 2008, 10:15 PM
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smile.gif ... thank you Daniel !!
Haha .. I was reading it a few time, it just feels good .. smile.gif

I really have to say i like your encouraging posts you do here in the forum ... really good to have you here. You seem to have a pure love for music, just because it's music ... please continue like that !!


Great kyldeee ... i would love to hear your take, any plans to post something soon?


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post Jun 18 2008, 07:14 PM
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I think it's very nice! Also your tone is just like Muris's!


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post Jun 19 2008, 04:03 PM
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I thought you captured the attitude of this track very well tightening up a few little things would push it over the edge for me, GREAT JOB! Nice playing


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post Jun 20 2008, 06:04 PM
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excellent take! I like your aggressive playing here and the tone is fantastic. smile.gif
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