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Pizzoaro
post Jun 15 2008, 01:14 AM
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So heres my version:

Attached File  Nocturnal_vision_Cover.mp3 ( 3.14MB ) Number of downloads: 291


Let me know what u think Marcus smile.gif

I dunno why, but i cant seem to get the right tone unsure.gif
Its something different using it on my guitar sad.gif

Well anyway, criticise me for everything else but my recording skills xD
I am really bad at it... hehe

And yes, i know i am bad at bends xD

Greetings

-Lars

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Marcus Lavendell
post Jun 15 2008, 11:09 AM
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Wow Lars! I like this a lot biggrin.gif
I don't think there's anything wrong with your tone, and your recording skills seems just fine. It all sounds great! smile.gif

Your playing is very good, I'm impressed Lars! biggrin.gif
You seem to be more comfortable when playing the slow parts though, and you do it very good. But when you play a fast lick it sounds as if you get tense, and you lose control over the pitch. So don't push your speed limit, and remember to stay rexlaxed at all times... just as relaxed as when you play the slower parts.

No timing problems at all - Excellent!

Sometimes you use vibrato, and sometimes you don't. But your vibrato is very very nice so I'd just like to hear more of it. Don't be afraid of over doing it! Your bends are fine as well, most of them are right on pitch. The only thing I think you should wok on there is to add vibrato! smile.gif

Again, great job! smile.gif
Hope to hear more from you!


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Pizzoaro
post Jun 15 2008, 09:47 PM
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Thank u marcus! biggrin.gif

Yeah, i didnt actually know anything about the vibratos "deepness" until i joined GMC, so it was kind of new for me...

Im working a lot on it though...

And ur definitly right about me getting tense ... hehe..
I actually play best when i havent warmed up and sitting for myself jamming xD

Thank u for the comment..

Just wondering, i wanna record my version of ur other lessons as well..
If i play the backing over my speakers, while recording it with mics into the speaker, is that ok?
Is it allowed?

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post Jun 16 2008, 09:26 AM
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Hey Pizzoaro,

Great job !!! it is almost perfect, I am Studing the same lesson but I am still far ..... biggrin.gif

Ciao
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