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post Jun 15 2008, 05:20 PM
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Some time back I started writing some lyrics, which I unfortunately never went on with. I might write a few more lines to it one of these days - maybe make it an intro to a concept album-ish thing.

SEAS OF FOREVER

From candlelights stem upside-down fountains of smoke
Their rendezvous unveils a dimmed ocean
As the flames set the sky ablaze in red shades
The hazy waters confirm your notion

Now you are sailing the seas of forever
You see horizons waver before your eyes
Dreary in their loom - you hold your terror at bay
But this voyage is never-ending


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post Jun 15 2008, 07:03 PM
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Hey Cael., That was really good smile.gif

Has the potential to be a really nice song biggrin.gif

You should start writing more and posting on the board you have amazing potential smile.gif


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post Jun 15 2008, 08:14 PM
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You should definitly continue with these lyrics..Maybe fine tune them later on to fit a song.. wink.gif


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post Jun 15 2008, 09:38 PM
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Definitely add to this, Lots of potential smile.gif
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post Jun 17 2008, 12:02 AM
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Very nice poetry and choice of words man smile.gif


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post Jun 17 2008, 12:06 AM
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im speechless that was great


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post Jun 17 2008, 12:47 AM
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Woah, man! Thanks for the kind words on this. I'll definately try to go on with this :-)


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post Apr 28 2009, 07:05 PM
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I love it ^^
You should definetly keep going with this!


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post Apr 28 2009, 07:11 PM
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I say definitely try to develop this style, it's great! smile.gif Some song would be awesome as well!


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