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Jeffrey
post Jun 26 2008, 04:58 AM
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This song is called: Flaws of a Tempted Mind
My band is : Unto the Deceived

the vocals are off some but i was tired and worn out, etc etc.. excuses excuses lol but yea i think all together it sounds cool. lemme know what everything thinks.=)

no drums yet though sorry=(


ill tabbed out the parts of the song and ill lay down the lyrics for those who aren't metal savy=P

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post Jun 26 2008, 05:00 AM
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I like the song , sounds good smile.gif

I would, however, suggest turning down the guitar and turning up the vocals

Can't wait to hear it with drums! smile.gif


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post Jun 26 2008, 11:33 AM
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Cool!!! wink.gif I like it!


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post Jun 26 2008, 11:41 AM
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nice track in there


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post Jul 6 2008, 12:38 PM
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Song sound interesting , but the mixing is not good..Guitar is way too loud against everything and songs like its clipping..


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post Jul 7 2008, 05:38 PM
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QUOTE (Bogdan Radovic @ Jul 6 2008, 04:38 AM) *
Song sound interesting , but the mixing is not good..Guitar is way too loud against everything and songs like its clipping..


Yea im not to good at the whole "mixing well" thing. I use a free program called Kristal, its better than audacity(waht i used to use) but it isn't nearly as good as a studio. I'll re-record it more balanced and then check it out.


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post Jul 8 2008, 11:29 AM
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Cool,I agree with Bole,it is too laud.but ideas are cool.Like the vocals too.smile.gif


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post Jul 8 2008, 10:35 PM
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I agree with Nemanja and Bole. Some great ideas here with alot of potential smile.gif But I recommend getting Cubase or Reaper to record and mix with.


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Haha, now that I've been trying to figure out settings for my soundcard I suddenly got a bit worried that I had done something completely wrong, as the guitar sound is quite loud.

What I could hear from the clean vocals in the back ground was really good though! And all in all a good song. I too however suggest getting a program like Cubase!


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