Could Use Some Feedback On This |
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Could Use Some Feedback On This |
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Jul 17 2008, 09:23 PM |
I have started working on a song and i have come up with a intro riff that i am pretty happy with but i could need some more work.
I just want to know what everyone think of it since i am not that good at writing I_will_live_forever_synth_midi.mid ( 3.79K ) Number of downloads: 152 -------------------- My Gear
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Jul 17 2008, 09:32 PM |
It reminds me a lot of game music - and trust me, it's not just because of the midi, because I've heard and written toooo much in midi. That said, I like it!
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Jul 17 2008, 09:37 PM |
Yeah i wasnt to sure of the tempo either a think i would like the first synth part to be slower and then it would go faster when the guitars enter
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Jul 17 2008, 10:45 PM |
nice midi track and good idea for intro riff
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Jul 18 2008, 05:07 AM |
I like it But i agree with that it could be a bit slower
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Jul 23 2008, 11:51 PM |
Very nice Superize ! I would maybe leave it at this tempo (with a little different drums groove) and use this parts as intro and than slow down the song in the first verse (you don't actually has to slow down the tempo) just hit the long chords/notes to slow it down...And than you go back to speedy stuff in the chorus
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Jul 24 2008, 11:21 AM |
Very nice Superize ! I would maybe leave it at this tempo (with a little different drums groove) and use this parts as intro and than slow down the song in the first verse (you don't actually has to slow down the tempo) just hit the long chords/notes to slow it down...And than you go back to speedy stuff in the chorus hehe just some ideas.. Cheers Cool idea Bogdan i will certanly think about it -------------------- My Gear
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Jul 24 2008, 10:41 PM |
here is a new version of the intro i have changed o few things
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