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post Aug 1 2008, 05:28 PM
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Im holding all the cards,
But hes still winning !
Still winning.

Im making all my moves.
To make you love me again.
But hes still winning.
Still winning this game of love.

Ive seen it all before.
Nothing else has looked like this,
Before.
And now im scared.

The thought of losing you,
Is something I dont want to do.
So please, I hope you finally see.
If you do choose him,
You can say goodbye to me.


Chorus:
Im in love with you,
And you dont even see it.
Its like I was always here,
But you were to busy to care.

So here I stand,
With my heart bleeding in my hands,
Hoping that something,
Will make you understand,
Just how I feel....

Verse 2:


Maybe the day you two met,
Was the best day of your life.
I know now.
It was the worst of mine.

I guess taking a break.
Never really works.
I should held on to you tight,
And never let you wander out of my sight.

Im holding all the cards,
But hes still winning ?
I guess im going all in.
Do you really love him ?


Chorus:
Im in love with you,
And you dont even see it.
Its like I was always here,
But you were to busy to care.

So here I stand,
With my heart bleeding in my hands,
Hoping that something,
Will make you understand,
Just how I feel....


Verse 3: The times we spent were amazing,
This I cant deny.
But in your heart if you want to be with him,
I guess thats ok.
But never again will I love you,
In the same way.

I will always be there for you,
The friend you've longed to have.
So now Im saying goodbye to you.
And everything we had.

Goodbye.


________© John Minoia 2008

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post Aug 1 2008, 07:33 PM
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post Aug 3 2008, 10:35 AM
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Great love story,and well sad.I just find some parts a bit strong,like "So here I stand,
With my heart bleeding in my hands".But that 's just me.smile.gif
Great job man.


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post Aug 5 2008, 02:54 PM
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QUOTE (Nemanja Filipovic @ Aug 3 2008, 01:35 AM) *
Great love story,and well sad.I just find some parts a bit strong,like "So here I stand,
With my heart bleeding in my hands".But that 's just me.smile.gif
Great job man.



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I understand what you were saying about that one part. Im going to use that criticism for further work biggrin.gif


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