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post Sep 11 2008, 04:42 PM
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Ok, I was so amazed at how much the last version of this sucked, I completely redid most of it. Better drums (albeit still meh) and better structure, the song only has 2 tempos now, And its nice cause the first half is 130, and the last half is 180, So it wasnt that hard to record. Hope you enjoy, This im sure, Is the final version ill do.


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post Sep 11 2008, 09:19 PM
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Umm I might have gone deaf but I hear no snare from the drums. Is the snare missing or did you put it way low? Oh wait now when I listened again I heard it. You seriously need to raise the volume of the snare, it should be at least as loud as the kick drum. The snare and the kick drum are your driving force without one of them it sounds like the sound is standing still when it should be running forward.

Otherwise good work. I would go for panned rhythm guitars for the solo that starts at about 4:30, that way they won't interfere as much with the solo guitar.


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post Sep 11 2008, 09:34 PM
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Nice, I like the tone on the solos and specially the relaxed first half, soothing melodies in there, followed by crazy riffing soon after. Good job!


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post Sep 11 2008, 10:05 PM
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The snare always gets lost, I dont know why, I always end up going back and doing that. As for the guitars, they are panned left and right. The mixing might be off cause im temporarily deaf in one ear (long story) and its hard for me to reallyy hear it through headphones (I cant really). So all the little stuff like that will be fixed.
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