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post Sep 26 2008, 11:35 PM
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Ok, the playing isnt flawless, neither is the sound, programmed drums and synth and just recorded through my computer. This is just a preproduction before we go into the studio

The song will be called Jihad/Crusade and be about the crusades from the middle ages up until today without taking sides and involving politics.

What do you think about the song?

Hope that someone can give me some critisism. Maybe I will upload more songs cause there is alwas good to get a neutral look from the outside on the songs!
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post Sep 28 2008, 02:15 PM
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I think it sounds good, nice ideas everything seems in place ! Please update us with the full version once you record it smile.gif


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post Sep 29 2008, 01:15 AM
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I really like this song! Let us know when you finish the final song. My cousin would so listen to this on his ipod!! biggrin.gif

Criticism: I wouldn't really call this criticism but you know that real soft part that had barely any noise? (after the middle) Maybe some soft distortion guitar would be better w/ the bass (or just make the bass a lil louder cuz I couldn't hear much of it)? Or another idea is have a guitar do distorted noises in the background (just holding power chords and strum a nice slow-ish rhythm to add suspense like Disturbed does in their song Inside the Fire's intro) while the bass takes over the 'lead' part in that lil section. Or another crazy idea is to add piano during that part but yeah...lol

I hope you understand what I'm saying haha. You may or may not agree! wink.gif
Great song though!

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post Sep 29 2008, 11:25 AM
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QUOTE (Minz80 @ Sep 29 2008, 02:15 AM) *
I really like this song! Let us know when you finish the final song. My cousin would so listen to this on his ipod!! biggrin.gif

Criticism: I wouldn't really call this criticism but you know that real soft part that had barely any noise? (after the middle) Maybe some soft distortion guitar would be better w/ the bass (or just make the bass a lil louder cuz I couldn't hear much of it)? Or another idea is have a guitar do distorted noises in the background (just holding power chords and strum a nice slow-ish rhythm to add suspense like Disturbed does in their song Inside the Fire's intro) while the bass takes over the 'lead' part in that lil section. Or another crazy idea is to add piano during that part but yeah...lol

I hope you understand what I'm saying haha. You may or may not agree! wink.gif
Great song though!



Thanx for your crticism. I am acctually going to play a sitar in that break, and maybe do the rest of the solo on an electric sitar too, but we'll see how it sounds.

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post Sep 29 2008, 10:40 PM
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QUOTE (metalpete @ Sep 29 2008, 05:25 AM) *
Thanx for your crticism. I am acctually going to play a sitar in that break, and maybe do the rest of the solo on an electric sitar too, but we'll see how it sounds.

If you like what you heard you may also want to check out our other songs ( in studio quality) at myspace


That's cool lol, gonna check out the myspace! biggrin.gif
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post Sep 29 2008, 11:00 PM
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This sounds cool. Tuning is the powerful one smile.gif I don't think I heard bass guitar, it would give it much more power.

I would like to hear finished song.


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Heavy stuff there mate! smile.gif


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