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Dejan Farkas
post Nov 6 2008, 03:23 PM
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Hi guys, I just discovered this part of the forum, don't know how I missed it before unsure.gif smile.gif

So, here are some of my poems written few years ago,
hope you enjoy them, feel free to comment smile.gif



four seasons..

first breath of dawn in early spring..
bird song spread in air like wing..
flowers scared the snow away..
melting night for newborn day...

lightning strike at summer noon..
passion like fire erupt so soon..
sun warm up the desert sand..
hear the agony of dry land...

twilight dream through autumn rain..
foggy feeling awaking again..
drinking from the well of tears..
water made of endless years...

winter midnight is here, at last..
turning all the things to past..
hiding in a mountain cave..
the earth lay in white grave...


the dawn..

spark of hope dyed my dreams..
ray of light revealed my fears..
scream for the dawn..
of a lonesome clown...

what lies behind the night..
is it just another fight..
daylight never seen..
want to be within...

the dawn is almost here..
i can feel it's near..
awaken waiting for..
the dawn of nevermore...


a poem..

as a wind in a forest..
and a cloud in a rain..
as a speechless word..
for a love died in vain…

as a sand in a desert..
and a water in a sea..
as a never-ending dream..
for you and for me…

as a march in a storm..
and a song in a hate..
as a voluntary inmate..
for a kiss of fate…

as a tale in a dream..
and a wisdom of a fool..
as an invisible reflection..
for a broken jewel…

as a child in an elder..
and a silence in a band..
as a miraculous poem..
for a dance until the end...


simple song..

lost for hours..
in a simple song..
trapped in flowers..
of a valley long...

northern light..
set sail for my ship..
a dream of night..
so far, so deep...

tried to hide..
under angel's wing..
from a rising tide..
of a sudden sting...

burning fire..
and the wind along..
take me higher..
to the simple song...





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post Nov 6 2008, 03:26 PM
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Nice!

*I didn't know about this part of the fourum either.


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post Nov 6 2008, 03:31 PM
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It's great to discover your poet-side too, Dejan biggrin.gif

These are really cool poems btw, i especially liked the dawn... great rhymes. They have a real classical feel to it

Thanx for uploading, cheers cool.gif


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post Nov 6 2008, 03:39 PM
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Thank you guys, very kind of you smile.gif


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Dejan I read of all of those and I must say I really enjoyed them all.
It had some rhymes in a couple of them that seemed a bit awkward and the wording was a little fuzzy at some tiny parts but besides that you had some really great rhymes and an interesting approach on the various topics you covered.

Im glad you found this part of the forum.
I hope to see more of you on here.

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post Nov 7 2008, 10:02 AM
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Thank you for the comment smile.gif

It was fuzzy in my head at the time so it's no wonder biggrin.gif

These poems came out somehow during some period of my life, I had a need to express this way. If I get any more, would be happy to share it smile.gif


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QUOTE (Dejan Farkas @ Nov 7 2008, 01:02 AM) *
Thank you for the comment smile.gif

It was fuzzy in my head at the time so it's no wonder biggrin.gif

These poems came out somehow during some period of my life, I had a need to express this way. If I get any more, would be happy to share it smile.gif



Well dont take it the wrong way biggrin.gif, they were all very good. Just like tiny little parts were a bit fuzzy.

Simple Song could verywell be a nice acoustic song! smile.gif


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post Nov 7 2008, 01:40 PM
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I don't take it wrong, I like them very much and that's why I am sharing them smile.gif

To be completely honest, I even suprised myself with these poems, was not aware that I can write something good biggrin.gif


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QUOTE (Dejan Farkas @ Nov 7 2008, 04:40 AM) *
I don't take it wrong, I like them very much and that's why I am sharing them smile.gif

To be completely honest, I even suprised myself with these poems, was not aware that I can write something good biggrin.gif


Well im glad you shared them, I enjoyed them aswell


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