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post Nov 25 2008, 01:15 PM
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Today i have recorded two new videos for you to listen.....

The first one is Muris Phrygian Phrasing Beginner lesson...... I started working on this lesson last night and i learned it pretty quick and it is easy and very fun to play...... There might be some minor errors but othervise i am pretty happy with this.....




The other one is Muris Bb minor Phrasing Beginner lesson...... this one is a bit trickier and i have been working on this for a long time. I am still not happy with it there are som bits that i cant play corectly yet.... but i am happy with this take to.




I would love some feedback on theese but positive and negative.....

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post Nov 25 2008, 01:16 PM
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Damn. I want to hear these but I'm at work. I will give you feedback when I'm home smile.gif


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post Nov 25 2008, 01:18 PM
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I will be waiting for your feedback


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post Nov 25 2008, 02:41 PM
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First one, some issues with timing near the end, but having in mind that you just learned it recently, you did a good job smile.gif

Second one, well it's more difficult and still require some practicing, but nice take anyway.. accuracy and timing will come with practicing smile.gif


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post Nov 25 2008, 03:23 PM
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I thought the first one was performed pretty much on-the-dot to what Muris played, and you made few to no mistakes in that one. I would suggest working on your vibrato. The second one was quite well performed as well, except for, as I said, perhaps your vibrato was a little weak. And great job being strict with your alternate picking! I find that very difficult, and pretty much only play a form of hybrid picking, so it's great to see others accomplish that. Bottom line, I think you played both of them quite accurately. Great job!
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post Nov 25 2008, 10:17 PM
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It think you did them both great man. The primary concern now should be to execute them cleanly. When you go to 16th notes sometimes you let notes bleed into one another. This shouldn't happen - they should all be flawlessly picked without bleeding. However this is just a minor issue, and you did spot on both lessons, great job man, you are really progressing I can see that, judging from the previous takes on collabs that I heard. Well done mate.


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post Nov 26 2008, 03:22 AM
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nice you are improving man! cool.gif


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post Nov 26 2008, 03:57 AM
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You keep getting better and better supersize!! Good Job!! I think your biggest weakness that I can see is your vibrato. Keep working on that. Your technique will improve with time. Good Job!!

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