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Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Nov 30 2008, 05:18 PM
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Verse:
One to many.
He couldnt get no relief.
So he packed all his bags,
Because Tonight, He was gonna leave.

No goodbyes.
As he held that gun to his head.
She said" Do it ! "
So I painted the floor red.


Looking back on it now,
There years have gone by.
Sense Ive told my kids I loved them,
And that I didnt want to die !


But now that Im in Heaven,
My world is gone.
This isnt where I should be,
This isnt where I belong !


Chorus:
I forced my way into Heaven.
Wish I was there to say goodbye.
I forced my way into Heaven.
It kills me everyday to hear them cry.

I forced my way into Heaven.
Even though I didnt want to die.


Verse 2: And when they found me in that garage,
Their world began to fade .
With a quiet rain falling from the skys,
With all these tears that I have made.

How do I tell them all,
That Im sorry for what I did!

And that I want to come back
So I could see my kids!.



Chorus:
I forced my way into Heaven.
Wish I was there to say goodbye.
I forced my way into Heaven.
It kills me everyday to hear them cry.

I forced my way into Heaven.
Even though I didnt want to die.



Small Section Repeats ( Verse 3):
Looking back on it now,
There years have gone by.
Sense Ive told my kids I loved them,
And that I didnt want to die !

But Im still alive !
Im still alive!
Living in everyone of you,
Cause thats all,
All I can really do....


Chorus (Screaming): I forced my way into heaven.
CAN SOMEONE GET ME OUT OF HERE !!!!

(Quieter) I forced my way into heaven,
It really gets lonely up here.




Outro( Loud Tone) : Can someone let me out of heaven ?
How long must I wait, till I see them again!

Can someone let me out of heaven?
Three years of PAIN and Im to blame !

(Leads Into brief Chorus)

Chorus: I forced my way into Heaven.
And Im sorry that I did.

I forced my way into Heaven.
Good God, I really miss my kids.


© John Minoia 2008


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Song I wrote about someone I know whos father tragically commited suicide awhile ago, This is from the fathers perspective. Which is the biggest mystery of all.

I really hope you enjoy this, because I worked pretty hard on it..

This post has been edited by Eat-Sleep-andJam: Dec 4 2008, 01:08 PM


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post Dec 1 2008, 01:56 AM
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lol, its got the length of an epic tongue.gif

i'd have to hear it all recorded and stuff to get the full effect but i like it biggrin.gif


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post Dec 3 2008, 04:24 PM
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wow, best lyrics from you so far I believe, tho (Quieter) I forced my way into heaven,
It gets really lonely up here.
Great line too, but I jsut couldn' t stop laughing biggrin.gif Sounded so funny in my head!


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post Dec 4 2008, 01:10 PM
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Im glad you like it Jesse. That line sounded odd to me to, I made a minor revision to it.

I really tryed to get inside the mind of my friends dad, who got drunk one night after a highschool reunion, and he got in a argument with his wife, and then it ended up with him killing himself.
Its really a sad story.

Hope you guys liked it smile.gif


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post Dec 4 2008, 01:11 PM
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Wow.... that' s one evil wife:X


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post Dec 4 2008, 01:16 PM
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QUOTE (Jesse @ Dec 4 2008, 04:11 AM) *
Wow.... that' s one evil wife:X



Its quite funny you said that, everyone calls here evil down here aswell. blink.gif


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