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post Dec 10 2008, 01:08 PM
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Hey there!

Today while I was waiting for the next collaboration to play, I decided not to wait and get down and try to write something kinda new... As I was working hard on bends and vibratos lately and I tried something over that... Well here it is, you can be harsh on me biggrin.gif

Please I need some feedback on my playing (and maybe some creativity issues), I dont plan to release it or something, so melody may be extremely similar to something else so please do not SUE me about it;)

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post Dec 10 2008, 03:35 PM
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is this the right place to post this? biggrin.gif


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American Stratocaster Maple Standart with X2N bridge pickups
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Self made Fretless Strat type made of Rosewood/Maple with self wound Neck and Ibanez V8 Bridge Pickups
Floor Pod 2.0 Amp Simulation System
Pod Xt Pro Rack Amp Simulation System
Digitech TSR 12 Rack Effect and Studio Reverb
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post Dec 10 2008, 07:59 PM
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as there is no comments yet I believe there must be somewhere else to post this biggrin.gif


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American Stratocaster Maple Standart with X2N bridge pickups
Samwick Artist custom modified Baswood Lespaul with S.Duncan JB and N56 pickups
Self made Fretless Strat type made of Rosewood/Maple with self wound Neck and Ibanez V8 Bridge Pickups
Floor Pod 2.0 Amp Simulation System
Pod Xt Pro Rack Amp Simulation System
Digitech TSR 12 Rack Effect and Studio Reverb
Behringer Composer Rack Compressor Expander
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it, surely, spoiled me!!!


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post Dec 10 2008, 08:04 PM
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I listened to the track and it sounds very nice mate, there are some notes here and there that needs some fine tuning, but a cool jam nevertheless. smile.gif


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post Dec 10 2008, 09:00 PM
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QUOTE (Ivan Milenkovic @ Dec 10 2008, 09:04 PM) *
I listened to the track and it sounds very nice mate, there are some notes here and there that needs some fine tuning, but a cool jam nevertheless. smile.gif


thank you man biggrin.gif


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American Stratocaster Maple Standart with X2N bridge pickups
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Self made Fretless Strat type made of Rosewood/Maple with self wound Neck and Ibanez V8 Bridge Pickups
Floor Pod 2.0 Amp Simulation System
Pod Xt Pro Rack Amp Simulation System
Digitech TSR 12 Rack Effect and Studio Reverb
Behringer Composer Rack Compressor Expander
Morley Bad Horsie Wah Pedal
Behringer FB1010 Floor Board



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post Dec 10 2008, 09:11 PM
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Good job man!

However I can hear quite some timing issues.
Also I would like some more bends and wider vibrato, personally, to add even more feeling.

A narrow vibrato makes one sound close to out of tune, so this is absolutely vital. Very many struggle with this, and correct guidance is needed. Check Emir, Lavendell, Piotr, etc for superb examples.

Timing wise, I think it is especially on the fast runs.
Muris gave me an advice once to improve on this, it was to record the take with guitars pretty much lower than backing, to really get alot more feel of the chords and beats.

After the recording, you can just raise the volume accordingly, till it is balanced.

Hope this helped!

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And melody wise, I like your composition, but it's very repetitive.
As I told Tjchep, Pedja adviced me to try to build a climax. Also using question&answer approach to gain versatility.

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post Dec 10 2008, 09:40 PM
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QUOTE (kjutte @ Dec 10 2008, 10:11 PM) *
Good job man!

However I can hear quite some timing issues.
Also I would like some more bends and wider vibrato, personally, to add even more feeling.

A narrow vibrato makes one sound close to out of tune, so this is absolutely vital. Very many struggle with this, and correct guidance is needed. Check Emir, Lavendell, Piotr, etc for superb examples.

Timing wise, I think it is especially on the fast runs.
Muris gave me an advice once to improve on this, it was to record the take with guitars pretty much lower than backing, to really get alot more feel of the chords and beats.

After the recording, you can just raise the volume accordingly, till it is balanced.

Hope this helped!

Edit:
And melody wise, I like your composition, but it's very repetitive.
As I told Tjchep, Pedja adviced me to try to build a climax. Also using question&answer approach to gain versatility.


Thank you for your deep comments man biggrin.gif I'll look up for your advices as fast as I can....


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Spoiler:


Vigier G.V Wood HH
American Stratocaster Maple Standart with X2N bridge pickups
Samwick Artist custom modified Baswood Lespaul with S.Duncan JB and N56 pickups
Self made Fretless Strat type made of Rosewood/Maple with self wound Neck and Ibanez V8 Bridge Pickups
Floor Pod 2.0 Amp Simulation System
Pod Xt Pro Rack Amp Simulation System
Digitech TSR 12 Rack Effect and Studio Reverb
Behringer Composer Rack Compressor Expander
Morley Bad Horsie Wah Pedal
Behringer FB1010 Floor Board



it, surely, spoiled me!!!


and may the force be with you :)
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post Dec 10 2008, 10:00 PM
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i see a good start in this track just keep going mate


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post Dec 11 2008, 02:45 AM
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QUOTE (Hisham Al-Sanea @ Dec 10 2008, 11:00 PM) *
i see a good start in this track just keep going mate


thank you very much Hisham your words mean a lot to me... wink.gif


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Spoiler:


Vigier G.V Wood HH
American Stratocaster Maple Standart with X2N bridge pickups
Samwick Artist custom modified Baswood Lespaul with S.Duncan JB and N56 pickups
Self made Fretless Strat type made of Rosewood/Maple with self wound Neck and Ibanez V8 Bridge Pickups
Floor Pod 2.0 Amp Simulation System
Pod Xt Pro Rack Amp Simulation System
Digitech TSR 12 Rack Effect and Studio Reverb
Behringer Composer Rack Compressor Expander
Morley Bad Horsie Wah Pedal
Behringer FB1010 Floor Board



it, surely, spoiled me!!!


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