Reply to this topicStart new topic
> Little Riff
Sircraigery
post Dec 12 2008, 07:57 AM
Post #1


GMC:er
*

Group: Members
Posts: 673
Joined: 12-May 07
Member No.: 1.835



This is my first official 'interlude' thingy I've written in years andyears that i DON'T hate haha.


All the time when I try to solo, it sounds like crap...then this came out biggrin.gif
Too bad it's not longer, but oh well, I'll add to it as time goes.


What do you think of this tone? I don't have a POD, just a mac (set to british lead amp sim). Just my guitar straight into it.





Attached File(s)
Attached File  Little_Riff.mp3 ( 364.41K ) Number of downloads: 96
 


--------------------
Guitars:
Ibanez Prestige RG2610E [BKP Cold Sweat]
Ibanez Prestige RG2550E [Carbon Fiber Plastics]
Ibanez Roadstar II RS-135 [Stock]
Quest Acoustic [Stock]

Effects:
Electro-Harmonix Metal Muff
Ibanez Weeping Demon Wah
Boss DR-3 Dr. Rhythym

Amp:
Marshall JCM2000 DSL 401

'Only the dead have seen the end of the war.' - Plato
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
Jesse
post Dec 12 2008, 11:02 AM
Post #2


GMC:er
*

Group: Members
Posts: 2.348
Joined: 5-July 08
From: Enschede/overijssel/Nederland
Member No.: 5.426



Good sound. The melody is a bit hard for me to grab.. I don' t really know how to say it. But it' s a good begin


--------------------
Don't just play it. Feel it!
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
kjutte
post Dec 14 2008, 06:03 AM
Post #3


GMC:er
*

Group: Passive
Posts: 1.710
Joined: 17-July 07
From: Norway
Member No.: 2.337



QUOTE (Sircraigery @ Dec 12 2008, 07:57 AM) *
This is my first official 'interlude' thingy I've written in years andyears that i DON'T hate haha.


All the time when I try to solo, it sounds like crap...then this came out biggrin.gif
Too bad it's not longer, but oh well, I'll add to it as time goes.


What do you think of this tone? I don't have a POD, just a mac (set to british lead amp sim). Just my guitar straight into it.


Hi!

I think the tone is Ok, but I also think you're playing this with low feeling and self esteem.
Basically as I tell most people here, work on vibrato (Use Zsolt, Emir, Lavendell, Piotr as guides)

Also, the bends are out of pitch and you're out of time.
I'd advice you to run a metronome in the background or something when you record, so it'll be spot on.

Now, the biggest noob-factors in guitar is bad vibrato and bad bends.
I've seen lots of people being able to shred, but having a barely existing vibrato.

In my opinion it makes the piece sound feel-less and not so good.
I really think you should work on it and keep your motivation 100% to grow better and better.

I don't know how long you've been playing, so sorry to be so honest, but I'm sure you want people's real opinions. smile.gif

Best of luck man!

This post has been edited by kjutte: Dec 14 2008, 06:17 AM
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post

Reply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:

 


RSS Lo-Fi Version Time is now: 19th August 2017 - 04:45 AM