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showyourfist View Member Profile	Dec 16 2008, 09:37 PM
Dec 16 2008, 09:37 PM	GMC:er Posts: 59 Joined: 5-December 08 From: England	A song about my favourite fictional character! Genre: Thrash Metal Kane Spoken intro "I kill things...It's what I was made too do...I'm rather good at it" Verse 1 Primordial murderer, darkness weaved into his soul Brought Violence too the world and doom to us all Cursed with wanderlust, evil as sin Strangled his own brother, killed his own kin Guitar solo 1 Verse 2 A mad god spoke Malediction Gave unto him judgement of conviction Punishment with no ending, mind rending Immortally suffering, into hell descending Guitar solo 2 Pre-human science, perverted cults Intellectual masterminds, living insults Diabolical conquests, lord over them all The red devil of death Kane the immortal Bridge Guitar solo 3 (main solo) Outro You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by showyourfist: Dec 16 2008, 10:09 PM -------------------- I've had three wives and three guitars. I still play the guitars-Andres Segovia

Eat-Sleep-andJam View Member Profile	Dec 16 2008, 09:48 PM
Dec 16 2008, 09:48 PM	GMC:er Posts: 2.412 Joined: 23-February 07 From: New york	Although I dont really know what much of this was about, it was a nice read and was super evil. One line I didnt like. QUOTE The red devil of death Kane the immortal Maybe break this up into two seperate lines, or choose a different ending. I could see if this is in a Metal genre it would be ok, but I mean it ends pretty abruptly with this, doesnt have much closure. Thats all, Nice job. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Join Me On the Lyrics Board ! "Find something worth dying for... ...And live for it"-The Uncreator

showyourfist View Member Profile	Dec 16 2008, 09:59 PM
Dec 16 2008, 09:59 PM	GMC:er Posts: 59 Joined: 5-December 08 From: England	QUOTE (Eat-Sleep-andJam @ Dec 16 2008, 08:48 PM) Although I dont really know what much of this was about, it was a nice read and was super evil. One line I didnt like. Maybe break this up into two seperate lines, or choose a different ending. I could see if this is in a Metal genre it would be ok, but I mean it ends pretty abruptly with this, doesnt have much closure. Thats all, Nice job. Cheers for the input! yeah there's alot I'm not happy with, it's supposed too be kind of like a running song, more too do with the thumping energy. I was wanting too add something too end it, more of a hook too make it more of a "song" but for the moment I'm stumped for ideas! Here's a link for some background on the character http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kane_(fantasy) You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- I've had three wives and three guitars. I still play the guitars-Andres Segovia

Marek Rojewski View Member Profile	Dec 16 2008, 10:03 PM
Dec 16 2008, 10:03 PM	Experienced Guitar Lord Posts: 1.671 Joined: 26-May 08 From: Lodz, Poland	Great lyrics! I would change "a living insult" to "living insults" it would fit the "perverted cults" more I think... I would add maybe another verse, but on the other hand there is something good in songs with less verses also. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Youtube channel My three lyrics: Paintings; Jester; Tiny Arrow

showyourfist View Member Profile	Dec 16 2008, 10:07 PM
Dec 16 2008, 10:07 PM	GMC:er Posts: 59 Joined: 5-December 08 From: England	QUOTE (Marek Rojewski @ Dec 16 2008, 09:03 PM) Great lyrics! I would change "a living insult" to "living insults" it would fit the "perverted cults" more I think... I would add maybe another verse, but on the other hand there is something good in songs with less verses also. Thanks good idea! I think I'll have too look into making a final verse of some sort to give the songs ending a meaning perhaps? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- I've had three wives and three guitars. I still play the guitars-Andres Segovia

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