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post Dec 21 2008, 01:23 AM
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A short Intro into a story im writing, hope you like it!

Imperium, Pt 1
Imperium Pt 1: War

[Narration: “Six thousand years in the future, man has risen from the horrors of nuclear war,
to build an empire among the stars. At its head sits Uriel the 1st, Emperor of humankind, Hero of all.
But all is not well, and dark things are brewing,
For Nothing that bleeds is beyond Betrayal, Nothing that bleeds is divine”]

[Synth] [half-time]

Demons dressed as angels

Plotting the death of man

“They dare to defy us?”

“Leave none alive!”

[Guitar and Drums come in] [full time]

Marching off to fight again

Time for man to die again

Weapons are prepared

Banners are unfurled

Show no mercy

Burn another world!

[Solo Guitar 1]

[Solo Guitar 2]

This war will be the death of us

We slaughter our own kind

Innocence lost on killing fields

How many more will die?

[Long Instrumental Section]

[Segue into PT 2]


Like i said, just an intro. smile.gif So kind of short. If anyone likes it, ill keep writing it!
All lyrics Copyright Colin Kauffman

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post Dec 21 2008, 01:26 AM
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haha i was kind of on the edge of my seat when i was reading this...very cool

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haha i was kind of on the edge of my seat when i was reading this...very cool

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post Dec 21 2008, 01:29 AM
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Thanks. Im going to revise it, as this is just a rough draft, but i plan to add more, as well as write parts 2, 3, 4, and 5 soon!


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post Dec 21 2008, 01:31 AM
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you should make an epic like Coheed and Cambria does


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post Dec 21 2008, 01:32 AM
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QUOTE (sigma7 @ Dec 20 2008, 07:31 PM) *
you should make an epic like Coheed and Cambria does

Thats what im planning. ive got the whole thing in my head, i just need to arrange it in song form.


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post Dec 22 2008, 12:28 AM
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Pretty cool stuff man, We need to hear the rest for sure.

PS

Uriel reminds me of Uriel Septim from Elder Scrolls Oblivion, Which is a good thing smile.gif
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post Dec 22 2008, 11:48 AM
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Good lyrics mate smile.gif

QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Dec 22 2008, 12:28 AM) *
Pretty cool stuff man, We need to hear the rest for sure.

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Uriel reminds me of Uriel Septim from Elder Scrolls Oblivion, Which is a good thing smile.gif


Uriel Septim is awesome biggrin.gif
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Nice one GuitarMan. Clearly we need to see the rest, this is just a teaser laugh.gif


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