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Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Dec 23 2008, 04:10 AM
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Now that I'm Scattered.
I guess,
None of it really mattered.
My hearts torn in pieces.
Fragments of Me.

She lives on the corner.
I get lost in those blue eyes.
How do I tell her that I love her?
And that I'll never say goodbye.

And I would give it all away.
Just to see her standing with me.

Make-up cant hide,
Those smiles that we share.
With a sparkle in her eyes.
That is blocked out from her hair.

Now that I'm Scattered.
I guess,
None of it really mattered.
My hearts torn in pieces.
Fragments of Me.


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This is kind of un-finished. But this is basically it. Another acoustic-feel love song for a girl I like wub.gif


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Rated Htr
post Dec 26 2008, 04:40 AM
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Kinda makes me think of johnson for some reason smile.gif

Also Imagining an Hawaian type of song ^^

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post Dec 26 2008, 05:16 AM
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lovely man wink.gif


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post Dec 26 2008, 05:44 AM
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QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Dec 25 2008, 07:40 PM) *
Kinda makes me think of johnson for some reason smile.gif

Also Imagining an Hawaian type of song ^^

Well written


If by Johnson you mean Jack Johnson then your spot on. I write alot in that style biggrin.gif



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post Dec 26 2008, 06:19 AM
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QUOTE (Eat-Sleep-andJam @ Dec 26 2008, 04:44 AM) *
If by Johnson you mean Jack Johnson then your spot on. I write alot in that style biggrin.gif



Thanks guys biggrin.gif


Yup, the same wink.gif


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post Dec 26 2008, 07:38 AM
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Nice lyrics mate smile.gif


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post Dec 26 2008, 04:43 PM
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Thanks Roger. smile.gif


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