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post Dec 23 2008, 04:11 AM
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A Funeral For Sarah
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She lay motionless upon her bed
Arms wrapped tightly around her knees
Body embraced by the pale winter light
Fighting it's way through the windowpane
Tears are dancing swiftly around her cheeks
But for how much longer can she cry?
Minutes pass by like years
Memories tear at her like fresh new wounds
In sorrow she finds the remains of existence
For she is afraid of what the world has become

A self inflicted punishment
Becomes the only way to live
Never to open herself up
Digging her grave for her funeral

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She lay motionless upon her bed
Arms wrapped tightly around her knees
Taken in by the warm summer light
Crawling it's way through a broken windowpane
Her eyes star unblinking into a void
Too dry to cry anymore
Time has stopped and existence ceased
A Body reduce to a frail shell in sleep
Rose are layed upon her descending coffin
As we all cry at a funeral for sarah


© Brett Windnagle, 2008
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post Dec 23 2008, 04:43 AM
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Masterful.

Im sorry for your loss?


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post Dec 23 2008, 09:36 PM
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it smile.gif

But no, I have not lossed anyone, Although the meaning of the song has to deal with loss.
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post Dec 23 2008, 09:42 PM
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Another amazing piece good job Uncreator


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post Dec 23 2008, 10:56 PM
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post Dec 23 2008, 11:17 PM
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Deep, awesome and extraordinary... As always ^^


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post Dec 26 2008, 04:38 AM
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Great feeling...Really felt like you did loose someone...strong words smile.gif


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