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post Dec 28 2008, 02:39 AM
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As A Wave Against Wind
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I lie here on my back
On the surface of the ocean
Clear blue sea
Against a clear blue sky
No land save a single island
Stuck on the edge of the earth
My eyes have never opened
Yet through thoughts I see
My body is but a vessel
For reality
Stuck in existence
True life exists within our minds

And I float here
On this sea
Never with direction
But always
With purpose
And I float here
On this sea
Moving along
The space...
Between spaces

SOLO

Moving slowly on this ocean
Moving nowhere on this sea
As a wave against wind
As a traveler in time


© Brett Windnagle, 2008
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post Dec 30 2008, 03:30 PM
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There were alot of really cool ideas in here.

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And I float here
On this sea
Moving along
The space...
Between spaces


The space between spaces. That is just great biggrin.gif

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My eyes have never opened
Yet through thoughts I see
My body is but a vessel
For reality



Also liked this part ^ wink.gif



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post Dec 30 2008, 04:44 PM
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Thanks, Glad you like.

I like the line 'space between spaces' too, It just sounds abnormal and cool to me smile.gif
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