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post Jan 9 2009, 12:36 AM
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Whats Worth Dying For
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It's a feeling inside
That no thoughts can ever explain
The words written upon this page
Will never do it justice
Every heart beat is for it
Every morning its the reason you awake
Its a love no person can provide
Its a hope no religion can preach

SOLO

You feel it in your bones
A part of you, A second heart
It's rhythm is fast and unchanging
It will simply never let you down
It does not judge, Nor condemn
Its an unprejudiced force in this world
Its language is universal to all
Always there at your every request

I will not change my mind
I will not alter my beliefs
This is what I was taught
This is what I preach
I will gladly live the poorest life
If I have this every day
I will gladly give my life for this
For its the reason I live for today

SOLO

I am part, Of something much bigger
I am a gear, In a massive machine
My function is not to serve
But to live my life as I see it fit
I am loved, By those I've never met
I am accepted, By my brothers and sisters
Our dedication is unquestionable
Our faith never faltering

Never!

I awoke this morning
To a life of pain
It seems the worst the world has
Is beeing thrown at me
Yet I shrug it off
And continue my journey
No matter what it throws my way
I dont give a F@$%

What is "this" to you, What do you live for?
Find something worth dying for...



...And live for it




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post Jan 9 2009, 12:41 AM
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wow...deep and inspirational...i especially like the part about the gear


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post Jan 9 2009, 01:02 AM
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Glad you like it, Its about the most loved thing in my life, So obviously there were strong feelings to be expressed, Im glad it showed smile.gif
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post Jan 9 2009, 04:46 AM
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I read your Xbox Bio right before I read this. So Ironic indeed.

I will be back to Crit this sometime tommorow.

Its great.

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Small typo. Shouldnt it be " You feel it in your bones"


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post Jan 9 2009, 12:21 PM
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I dont know what your talking about, It seems fine to me now.... ph34r.gif
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post Jan 9 2009, 12:30 PM
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Awesome Uncreator.


Really inspirational smile.gif


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post Jan 12 2009, 11:56 PM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jan 8 2009, 03:36 PM) *
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Whats Worth Dying For
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _


It's a feeling inside
That no thoughts can ever explain
The words written upon this page
Will never do it justice
Every heart beat is for it
Every morning its the reason you awake
Its a love no person can provide
Its a hope no religion can preach
True. I feel like that everyday of my life.
SOLO

You feel it in your bones
A part of you, A second heart
It's rhythm is fast and unchanging
It will simply never let you down
It does not judge, Nor condemn
Its an unprejudiced force in this world
Its language is universal to all
Always there at your every request
Yeah. This is becoming my favorite from you. It really speaks to the reader. I like the idea of a "second heart".
I will not change my mind
I will not alter my beliefs
This is what I was taught
This is what I preach
I will gladly live the poorest life
If I have this every day
I will gladly give my life for this
For its the reason I live for today
I cant pick on anything here. Its very good.
SOLO

I am part, Of something much bigger
I am a gear, In a massive machine
My function is not to serve
But to live my life as I see it fit
I am loved, By those I've never met
I am accepted, By my brothers and sisters
Our dedication is unquestionable
Our faith never faltering
I like the direction you went here, but at the same time I dont. I dont like the machine reference here. It seems out of place in a Lyric like this. Just IMO
Never!

I awoke this morning
To a life of pain
It seems the worst the world has
Is beeing thrown at me
Yet I shrug it off
And continue my journey
No matter what it throws my way
I dont give a F@$%
This was the perfect way to end this verse, and pretty much the song. I will live by these words.
What is "this" to you, What do you live for?
Find something worth dying for...



...And live for it




© Brett Windnagle, 2008
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This was so good. I loved the message here. And I really like how much I can relate to this.
One of your best smile.gif


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The Uncreator
post Jan 13 2009, 12:50 AM
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Thanks for the kinds words, And as for the machine reference, You dont think I would write something without just a teensy weensy bit of sci-fi there now did ya laugh.gif
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post Jan 13 2009, 02:57 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jan 12 2009, 03:50 PM) *
Thanks for the kinds words, And as for the machine reference, You dont think I would write something without just a teensy weensy bit of sci-fi there now did ya laugh.gif



laugh.gif I always look for it biggrin.gif


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