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post Jan 16 2009, 11:48 PM
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Here is another new song from me and my band, There arent any real specific lyrics right now, So we just dubbed it "Nuclear Fission", Even though are some near-folk style melodies, Let me know what you think, Any comments and or advice is much appreciated.
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post Jan 17 2009, 01:15 PM
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However played drums for this track is "the man". Drums are really, really fantastic. I also like when guitar and snare are playing in the same time, that tadadaa tadada. Guitar is rhythmically precise which I appreciate a lot.

What I don't like:

Song is really incomplete without the vocal, it SCREAMS for vocal part. It has lot of energy so...my impression when I hit the play buttin was like "Ok.....ok cool.....yeah....yeah....where is the singing?". This song naturally leads to singing part, so....
At the beginning where you have the whistling sound, it's ok basically, but try to adjust the sound properties, there are few unpleasant frequencies.

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post Jan 17 2009, 04:25 PM
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Yeah I know, we have studio time for recording vocals, but the studio isnt available for about another month and a half
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post Jan 17 2009, 04:35 PM
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I like this type of songs very much smile.gif it has the power in it!
I wonder how it will sound with vocals...


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post Jan 17 2009, 04:43 PM
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All 1st impressions as I listen...

Love the intro!!!! Creepy... Dig it. I loike the folk-ish stuff.

Just kicked in. Awesome. I love the guitar harmonies.

During the verse part. Or what sounds liek the verse to me, I'd like to heard the bass guitar more. Maybe if it came out from behind the guitars a bit. Doesnt sound bad, just a composition idea.

Nice riffs man. I love it.

Yeah, needs the voice though.

Very cool overall.

I'd buy your album.





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post Jan 17 2009, 04:46 PM
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I really like it man!
There are some very cool ideas in there and production is pretty good.
It's very tight and a great solid foundation for vox. I can't wait to hear the final mix, please post it!
How did you record this, what interface?


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post Jan 17 2009, 04:48 PM
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great intro... great track:D Really needs vocals!!! Would be awesome,


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post Jan 17 2009, 04:59 PM
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QUOTE (jer @ Jan 17 2009, 07:43 AM) *
All 1st impressions as I listen...

Love the intro!!!! Creepy... Dig it. I loike the folk-ish stuff.

Just kicked in. Awesome. I love the guitar harmonies.

During the verse part. Or what sounds liek the verse to me, I'd like to heard the bass guitar more. Maybe if it came out from behind the guitars a bit. Doesnt sound bad, just a composition idea.

Nice riffs man. I love it.

Yeah, needs the voice though.

Very cool overall.

I'd buy your album.


We actually don't have a bass player at the moment, So there actually isn't any bass, which makes the song a bit hollow. Im gonna be buying a cheap bass for myself so I can do the bass tracks untill we get a bassist. Thanks for the comments smile.gif


QUOTE (David Wallimann @ Jan 17 2009, 07:46 AM) *
I really like it man!
There are some very cool ideas in there and production is pretty good.
It's very tight and a great solid foundation for vox. I can't wait to hear the final mix, please post it!
How did you record this, what interface?


I use a Line 6 PODX3 Live going straight into my computer, Recorded straight into Reaper, and I use the POD also as an external EQ interface for balancing out the guitar sounds. Acoustic guitars are straight into my computers soundcard, With some added effects like EQ and a tiny delay added in after the recording in reaper. And the weird sound affects are some analogue synth, Bubble Echo, Buzz wave, and a octave shift mixed in with varying frequencies and volumes.

Thanks for all the comments guys, I really appreciate it smile.gif
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post Jan 18 2009, 12:01 AM
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That was a really cool song smile.gif The composition and arrangement is top notch smile.gif
There's so many neat things you can do with vocals when you have something like this to work with.


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post Jan 18 2009, 03:51 AM
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Once I get the studio time available, Im doing them for all my songs, Ive been wanting to do it for SO long.
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post Jan 18 2009, 04:28 AM
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sounds good.


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