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> Shadows Of The Horizon, Chapter 2: Mind Conspiracy
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I was once a little boy like you
Lost in the misteries of human' decision
Trapped inside a small dark room
Scared of it's contents, of it's people
And you know what I did?

...You'll never know...

I remember you, a majestic creature
The king of black and white and it's surrondings
The living hapiness combined with sorrow's pain
Just waiting for the turn of the clock
To strike!!!!
To take the most wonderful desire made by God
(Only if he existed in my world now...)

Pathetic shadow of mine, inferior side of greatness
Unworthy being related to this great figure
Relinquish the good in you, release the evil
Turn away from the dreams in the mirrors
Listen to them, listen like You've listened to me
In the past...
(It's just to hard to live a dream)

The dream is built of mind, of thinking
The logic in the numbers conceives it
They will always be better than you
They will always defeat you
They will always find ways to make you fall
(I just can't take it anymore)

Not even in your writing, the endless pit
Where you throw everything away
You'll never find safety from your eyes
What you see is what you think
What you think it's what's probable to happen

You'll never be free from pain...


Ok, this one isn't that good because it's meant to be a simple dialog that's going to build chapter 3, it's like, the explanation The Uncreator gives in his poems, but in the form of a dialogue writting

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