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> My First Song : Dirty Old Bastard, played badly sang badly
BiGBeN
post Jan 6 2007, 01:23 AM
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the lyrics just popped in my head one night

when i was trying to get to sleep

so i got up wrote the main body of

the song down then put some chords to it

the next day, then recorded it through

my shitty little head set mic.

i'll accept all crits and probly deserve them biggrin.gif

but if anyone has suggestions just give me a shout !

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post Jan 6 2007, 02:51 AM
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QUOTE (BiGBeN @ Jan 6 2007, 01:23 AM) *
the lyrics just popped in my head one night

when i was trying to get to sleep

so i got up wrote the main body of

the song down then put some chords to it

the next day, then recorded it through

my shitty little head set mic.

i'll accept all crits and probly deserve them biggrin.gif

but if anyone has suggestions just give me a shout !

Haha, nice lyrics! Ok, your rhythm playing was choppy, but I could hear where you are going with the chord progression so just get your timing and strumming under control. Believe it or not the raw material is there, vocals sounded fine for the mood of the song, and I believe once you get your rhythm down you can focus on vocals more while your guitar part is on autopilot.
Congrats it's not easy to write any song! Where's the tab?? smile.gif

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post Jan 6 2007, 11:24 AM
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I like this kind of simple song with a special feel to the vocals! biggrin.gif

work on your strumming timing!


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post Jan 6 2007, 07:42 PM
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Ditto what brick said,
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