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Fender23strat
post Jan 6 2007, 07:52 AM
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So here is a metalish song of mine i got it recorded but i'm starting to think i should have spent a little more money on the recording equipment cause it doesn't have that great of sound quality and I can't make it play with two guitars or anything like that. But here you go I hope You like it... I hope someone even responds this time. PLEASE RESPOND. Let me know if i suck or not.


http://download.yousendit.com/188A864D067AAB6A
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post Jan 6 2007, 08:33 AM
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Dude that was soooo awesome! I loved your formula. You had Verse-Chorus, Verse-Chorus Verse " then you had a bridege!" that led back to the verse. (or the main riff of the song) Great structure. It is rare to find musicians that understand the bridge. The Beetles used to call them "short eights". Its like the part of the song that makes everything make since. It can actually be a song in itself. Dude you get the right words and you have a bad ass song! Your bass player and drummer will play a major roll!!! Awesome....James
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post Jan 6 2007, 12:51 PM
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apparently I have to be "logged in" to hear it
I dont sign up to these sites so i cant listen

You can always upload to this site?


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Fender23strat
post Jan 6 2007, 08:25 PM
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QUOTE (fretdancer @ Jan 6 2007, 05:51 AM) *
apparently I have to be "logged in" to hear it
I dont sign up to these sites so i cant listen

You can always upload to this site?


Ya I've tried uploading to this site but it doesn't give me enough space to put the song on it. I know some of the other people have put songs on here where you just click it and it opens i need to find out how to do that.




Oh and James you could not have made me happier. Thanks
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post Jan 7 2007, 01:20 AM
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well i'll suggest some things for you. your tone isn't very metalish and imo u should play it faster and possibly with more gallops and palm mutes.

But on the other hand, it depends on how long u've been playing if u haven't been playing for a long then this is a good start.

Keep it up
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post Jan 8 2007, 06:57 AM
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QUOTE (Fender23strat @ Jan 6 2007, 10:25 PM) *
Ya I've tried uploading to this site but it doesn't give me enough space to put the song on it. I know some of the other people have put songs on here where you just click it and it opens i need to find out how to do that.
Oh and James you could not have made me happier. Thanks



If you convert the audio file to a normal mp3 sized file you can upload it to the site without any problem. smile.gif


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post Jan 8 2007, 11:23 PM
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QUOTE (Kristofer Dahl @ Jan 7 2007, 11:57 PM) *
If you convert the audio file to a normal mp3 sized file you can upload it to the site without any problem. smile.gif


Alright sorry for being a computer dummy but how do I actually go about converting it? On my computer I put the song in my documents and tried messing around with it but i'm completely lost. hehe please help me out wink.gif
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post Jan 8 2007, 11:25 PM
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A program I like to use to convert .wav to .mp3.

ImTOO WMA MP3 Converter

Search google for it. =D


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post Jan 9 2007, 12:11 AM
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AHAH I got it thanks Sanders. Here ya'll go.
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post Jan 9 2007, 12:20 AM
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Heh. My cousin plays a lot of metal music and I swear he plays some riff (that you play throughout the song) that sounds almost identical. The riff is catchy.. keep it up.


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