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post Feb 10 2009, 03:48 PM
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I added video responses to these lessons. Please comment if you can smile.gif

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-gu...r2-palm-muting/

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-gu...giated-chords2/

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-gu...giated-chords1/

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/phrygi...loing-beginner/

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-gu...-and-arpeggios/

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guit...atonics-lesson/

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guit...asing-beginner/


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post Feb 10 2009, 05:41 PM
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Hi Organized!

Here's my remarks and a personal oppinion on your video responses:

Palm Muting:
Your timing is very good, however there are some minor tempo issues
at 0:13, 0:18. Technically you nailed it, but since it is Metal, I would advise
you to pick the notes a bit stronger.smile.gif

Arpeggiated chords 2:
Same as above, at 0:05. Since you're playing chords, the picking is ok.

Arpeggiated chords 1:
You nailed this one, your hair is on your stings tho, so sometimes the first note
can't be heard:) When you finish each section, try to finish it exactly on time.

Phrygian soloing:
This one is perfect. The only thing you should work on is a bit on the vibrato,
and don't let your notes ring together starting at 0:30. I really like your bending tho,
it is full of emotions:). And again, you should pick a bit stronger, but this is only my
oppinion, technically it is perfect.

Strumming and arpeggios:
You nailed this one as well. Try to change the cord just a little bit faster, otherwise this
one's perfect.

Slow pentatonics:
This one is perfect as well. You play everithing clean, with a nice feel to it. Timing is also good.
It seemes that you are slowly gaining some self confidence here:)

Lydian phrasing:
Timing is ok. You overbended a bit at 0:17. Some tones ringing at the section starting at 0:46.
Otherwise it's ok. Where's your beard?biggrin.gif:D:D

In my oppinion, if you practice the way you practiced these, you'll have a clear road ahed of you.
Try to incorporate the licks you learned to your own style, and then change them a little bit so
it would reflect your emotions. I would like to hear some of your own stuff when you get these done.

Cheers bro
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post Feb 10 2009, 06:38 PM
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Hey Paul ("CHALLENGE STAR!") .. smile.gif .. nice collection indeed.
Agree with Zsolt's comments .. all together a great level and only some small details which you will fix easily with practicing.




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post Feb 10 2009, 07:48 PM
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Very nice tones you have OC! I don't have much to say about the playing, I don't see any obvious mistakes tongue.gif


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post Feb 12 2009, 03:14 PM
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QUOTE (Zsolt Galambos @ Feb 10 2009, 04:41 PM) *
Hi Organized!

Here's my remarks and a personal oppinion on your video responses:

Palm Muting:
Your timing is very good, however there are some minor tempo issues
at 0:13, 0:18. Technically you nailed it, but since it is Metal, I would advise
you to pick the notes a bit stronger.smile.gif

Arpeggiated chords 2:
Same as above, at 0:05. Since you're playing chords, the picking is ok.

Arpeggiated chords 1:
You nailed this one, your hair is on your stings tho, so sometimes the first note
can't be heard:) When you finish each section, try to finish it exactly on time.

Phrygian soloing:
This one is perfect. The only thing you should work on is a bit on the vibrato,
and don't let your notes ring together starting at 0:30. I really like your bending tho,
it is full of emotions:). And again, you should pick a bit stronger, but this is only my
oppinion, technically it is perfect.

Strumming and arpeggios:
You nailed this one as well. Try to change the cord just a little bit faster, otherwise this
one's perfect.

Slow pentatonics:
This one is perfect as well. You play everithing clean, with a nice feel to it. Timing is also good.
It seemes that you are slowly gaining some self confidence here:)

Lydian phrasing:
Timing is ok. You overbended a bit at 0:17. Some tones ringing at the section starting at 0:46.
Otherwise it's ok. Where's your beard?biggrin.gif:D:D

In my oppinion, if you practice the way you practiced these, you'll have a clear road ahed of you.
Try to incorporate the licks you learned to your own style, and then change them a little bit so
it would reflect your emotions. I would like to hear some of your own stuff when you get these done.

Cheers bro
-Zsolt

Thanks for the feedback Zsolt. It will help me to progress and to try and make these lessons perfect. Thanks for your time smile.gif

QUOTE (kaznie_NL @ Feb 10 2009, 06:48 PM) *
Very nice tones you have OC! I don't have much to say about the playing, I don't see any obvious mistakes tongue.gif

Cheers Kaz smile.gif


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post Feb 12 2009, 03:23 PM
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I'll check these out later when I can have sound in my pc...


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post Feb 12 2009, 03:28 PM
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Paul congratulations on a challenge star!
Very cool videos, glad to see you are tackling lots of lessons man smile.gif


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post Feb 12 2009, 03:38 PM
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QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Feb 12 2009, 03:14 PM) *
Thanks for the feedback Zsolt. It will help me to progress and to try and make these lessons perfect. Thanks for your time smile.gif


Cheers Kaz smile.gif



No problem man! Just keep practicing, your're already awesome at what you did there. Keep up with the vid responses, so everyone can see your improvement!


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