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> My First Full Song!, This is a piece I wrote a couple months ago!
19935027rafa
post Mar 11 2009, 10:45 PM
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Hi GMC!! Today i would like to share a piece i wrote. biggrin.gif This is my first "successful" (i really like it) and whole song. rolleyes.gif
I was inspired by some of the facts that have happend in my life. I wanted to express those sadness, happyness feelings which i have felt this last 6 months. This is a little "less than 2 minutes piece" tongue.gif . i hope that you like and enjoy it!
I'll be looking forward for constructive feedback.

P.D.: I ONLY FOCUS ON COMPOSITION. I really like music theory, but for this minisong, i decided to be kind of "free" and forget all the theory and only write what was on my mind according to what i felt. Because of that fact, it would be a honor if Theory-God Mr. Andrew Cockburn described it. smile.gif

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post Mar 11 2009, 11:02 PM
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Pretty cool


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post Mar 11 2009, 11:20 PM
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nice piece in this midi


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post Mar 12 2009, 01:11 AM
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i liked it. it had a mellow, laid back, but storytelling type of vibe to it that i really enjoyed.


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post Mar 12 2009, 01:45 AM
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QUOTE (19935027rafa @ Mar 11 2009, 05:45 PM) *
Hi GMC!! Today i would like to share a piece i wrote. biggrin.gif This is my first "successful" (i really like it) and whole song. rolleyes.gif
I was inspired by some of the facts that have happend in my life. I wanted to express those sadness, happyness feelings which i have felt this last 6 months. This is a little "less than 2 minutes piece" tongue.gif . i hope that you like and enjoy it!
I'll be looking forward for constructive feedback.

P.D.: I really like music theory, but for this minisong, i decided to be kind of "free" and forget all the theory and only write what was on my mind according to what i felt. Because of that fact, it would be a honor if Theory-God Mr. Andrew Cockburn described it. smile.gif



Very nice piece man!
I really like it a lot!
DO you have an mp3 version with better midi sounds? I would love to hear that!


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post Mar 12 2009, 03:26 PM
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Great arrangement!
However, I think that composition has no focus, I couldn't remember single melody, simply, listener can't feel where the melody is going.


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post Mar 12 2009, 09:30 PM
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QUOTE (David Wallimann @ Mar 11 2009, 10:45 PM) *
Very nice piece man!
I really like it a lot!
DO you have an mp3 version with better midi sounds? I would love to hear that!


Thanks David!! I'm glad you liked it. Unfortunately i have not been able to find a good MIDI-MP3 Converter. Do you know any good converter?


QUOTE (Vasilije Vukmirovic @ Mar 12 2009, 12:26 PM) *
Great arrangement!
However, I think that composition has no focus, I couldn't remember single melody, simply, listener can't feel where the melody is going.


Thanks!, well, that is because i wanted to focus only on the composition wink.gif , structure and feeling of this piece, and i wanted it to be unpredictable cool.gif
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