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post Apr 6 2009, 05:01 PM
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post Apr 6 2009, 05:24 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4,7
Cleanness - 4,5
Feel - 4,5
Posture - 5
Sound - 5

You didn't pick all the slides and bendings as in the lesson or you changed some of those. You even completely changed the position for that long arpeggio. I played it there because it has a totaly different color then if you move below 12th fret. Ok, it is allowed to be a little improvised but you almost overdid it smile.gif The other thing is when I first switch the pickup to the bridge position, you didn't really execute that part as written. Also some slided notes were missing here and there. Your vibrato wasn't present on all places written in the tab or GP. You missed the vibrato on a couple of long notes. Overall this is a great take but I rated it as if you composed this solo (this way you got a higher mark) smile.gif However I think you're a great player and there is bright future in front of you.

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post Apr 6 2009, 05:28 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4,5
Cleanness - 4,5
Feel - 4,5
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Sound - 5

Very nice take Andy
Some parts were improvised and some vibrato was missing in longer notes but overall you captured a feel for it great !


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Ramiro Delforte
post Apr 7 2009, 01:10 AM
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Rhythm placement - 4,8
Cleanness - 4,8
Feel - 4,8
Posture - 5
Sound - 5

Great take mate!
You have some minor things, the overall is a nice result.

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post Apr 8 2009, 12:32 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4,5
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Great take Andy!
I'll agree with everything said above from my fellow instructors
and also put some more noise reduction. smile.gif



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post Apr 8 2009, 02:09 PM
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Rhythm placement 5
Cleanness 4.8
Feel 5
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I'm impressed. Your playing, your tone and the sound are very good!! I found some small problems in the middle of the solo, (for ex: some bends aren't precise) but the rest is really good. Excelent job man! smile.gif


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post Apr 8 2009, 05:37 PM
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Nice take Andy! 96.16%


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