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post Apr 23 2009, 05:26 PM
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How I have known, the paths that lie ahead
New boundaries just waiting to change my eyes
Secrets that are kept from the true earthwalkers
How I have seen, the wounds carved in my flesh
The price a man will pay for a pitiful mistake
Wanting uthopic love will bring upon us...

[Chorus]
Old dawn comes to those who feel hope in their eyes
The flashing light showing us the skies
New hope dies when uthopies turn into lies
But the suffering will finally end
When Mar dies...

How I know you, your cruel and faithful smile
Walking miles, searching for a greater power of being
Torturing and seeing them pleading for a death kiss
How you will pay, for the careness that you gave
Memories won't be enough to retreave the kindness
I bow to your highness while I take your crown... (AWAY!)

[Chorus]

[Solo]

How can you be, the beauty of the beast
But still I find the claws you are known for murder
A cold strike in the heart of the poor people

[Chorus]

[Outro]
Hope dies when uthopies become lies
And forever shall we leave those to our eyes
Old dawn comes when a new hope is born
But until the beginning of the uthopic heaven
Mar must die!


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Was at some I-pod meets physics thing from school so I picked up the notebook and wrote what camed to my mind about my past events with whom I don't dare to remember I wrote a sonet for

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@FILIPE ROCHA 2009


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post Apr 23 2009, 10:06 PM
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Hmmm.... This is full of emotion.

Must say I liked it.
I dont want to crit this because I think its fine how it is, and I think you think the exact same thing.
Its how you feel.

As soon as I saw M.a.r.


all I could think of was M.a.r.i.a.


I dont know your situation with her or if it is about her,
But believe me man, I think your situation was probley mad similiar to mine.

Just an offer, if anythings bothering you, you could always P.M if you need someone to talk to.
Theres times when thats all I really needed and I didnt have it.

Peace Brother


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post Apr 24 2009, 12:05 AM
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Mar is marina for me...Mar in portuguese is the word for "sea", she used to be my sea, now she's only a memory that must die smile.gif I'm ok man, don't worry wink.gif

Thanks for the kind words


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