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> Velvet Roger - Writing A Solo Dynamics, Muris Varajic
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post Apr 28 2009, 10:55 PM
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Muris Varajic
post Apr 28 2009, 11:03 PM
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Rhythm placement 4.3
Cleanness 4
Feel 4
Posture 4
Sound 4

Nice job Roger!
Your bends are much better now and you
nailed rhythmic almost perfectly but I missed
feel and dynamic here, maybe because of your sound source
and maybe because you used bridge pickup as well,
try with neck pickup too, it's more warm
and somehow allows better expression IMO,
specially if it's single coil. smile.gif


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post Apr 28 2009, 11:14 PM
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Rhythm placement 4
Cleanness 4
Feel 4
Posture 4
Sound 4.3

Good job smile.gif


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post Apr 28 2009, 11:57 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4.5
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 4
Sound - 4

As Muris said, with more dynamics you can reach a top score with this lesson. Bends are also quite good, but - with the vibrato notes - they sound slightly sharp to me.


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post Apr 29 2009, 12:47 PM
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Rhythm placement 4,5
Cleanness 4
Feel 4,2
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Not bad at all. Some bends were a bit sharp (higher pitch). Also I would advise smoother connection between notes so you can achieve nicer melody flow. Anyway this is pretty good work.


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Rhythm placement 4.4
Cleanness 4.2
Feel 4.2
Posture 4.0
Sound 4.1

Wow, this was a very nice take! Great job. :-)


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post Apr 29 2009, 05:18 PM
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Rhythm placement 4.5
Cleanness 4
Feel 4
Posture 4
Sound 4.5

I like this take Roger, good job. Areas you need to work on are vibrato and bending but I am happy to see that you have improved already (compared to previous videos).


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post Apr 29 2009, 06:50 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 4.6
Sound - 4.3

Great take! smile.gif


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post Apr 29 2009, 08:10 PM
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82.63% Roger, (pass)


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