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> Machogriz - Songwriting Lesson, Piotr's lesson
Bear Rose
post May 2 2009, 07:36 PM
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Here's the link to the original lesson: Songwriting Lesson

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Trond Vold
post May 2 2009, 11:00 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 4,5
Sound - 4,5

Some work on the rhythm placement would do good. Also, it sounded like it lacked a certain flow the original lesson had.
But other than that, well done smile.gif


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post May 3 2009, 01:49 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4.5
Posture - 4.5
Sound - 4.5

Some little mistakes but overall a good take.


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post May 3 2009, 09:54 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3.8
Cleanness - 3.9
Feel - 3.9
Posture - 4,5
Sound - 4,6

Quite a good take there!
I like your tone and control a lot. As Trond said, a little work on rhythm placement is needed, but still this is a great take you can be happy with!


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Emir Hot
post May 5 2009, 01:25 AM
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Rhythm placement - 3,9
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4,7
Posture - 4,5
Sound - 4,5

Some notes were a bit shaky but your feel was great. Well done


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Muris Varajic
post May 5 2009, 02:07 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4,5
Posture - 4,5
Sound - 4,5

Small work on rhythm and it shall be jolly good, well done. smile.gif


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post May 7 2009, 11:52 AM
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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4,5
Posture - 4,5
Sound - 4,5

Great take!


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Dejan Farkas
post May 7 2009, 10:51 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3.5
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4.5
Posture - 4.5
Sound - 4.5


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post May 8 2009, 02:29 AM
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Good overall average score on this lesson man, 85.03%


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