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Trond Vold
post May 3 2009, 11:25 PM
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Hi guys smile.gif
Just finished off this new song and thought i would put it up here for anyone interested smile.gif

The structure and arrangement is very simplified compared to my previous songs. The verses still sound very different but i've put in a repeating chorus.

Please note: I've added a piano as a vocalplaceholder and it's got the melodies i'm looking for in the possibility i can get vocals on it smile.gif But so far i've only got the first verse and chorus planned out.

Hope you like it!

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This post has been edited by Trond Vold: May 3 2009, 11:28 PM


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post May 3 2009, 11:31 PM
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dude, i loved it. The piano makes it so warm and then it turns around with the guitar riffs and makes it scratch, its awesome. Is the intro legato?

also the solo sounded harmonizes like 2 guitars at once, it was very well done and well written, I get the feeling ur trying to put out here


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post May 3 2009, 11:38 PM
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This is killer Trond!
Can't wait to hear it with vox!


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post May 3 2009, 11:38 PM
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I always like listening to your tunes man. Great work here!
Yeah, you need to hook up with a great vocalist. wink.gif


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post May 4 2009, 12:14 AM
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Nice, that was great Trond biggrin.gif
One of your better songs smile.gif
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post May 4 2009, 01:16 AM
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Thanks guys! biggrin.gif

QUOTE (sigma7 @ May 4 2009, 12:31 AM) *
dude, i loved it. The piano makes it so warm and then it turns around with the guitar riffs and makes it scratch, its awesome. Is the intro legato?

also the solo sounded harmonizes like 2 guitars at once, it was very well done and well written, I get the feeling ur trying to put out here


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The solo are 2 seperate guitars with one of the guitars changing to harmonies in certain areas.


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post May 4 2009, 01:37 AM
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Dude, this is great man. Very main stream and quite ready for airplay IMO. The piano definitely will show a vocalist what your thoughts are here. Have you written any lyrics at all for it?


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post May 4 2009, 10:38 AM
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Great Trond!!! Really Great! biggrin.gif

The Piano also adds a nice touch, maybe you should add vocals and leave it as well, just my two cents wink.gif


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post May 4 2009, 10:48 AM
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I really love the piano part biggrin.gif , and it may work indeed as Rated Htr say to keep it in?



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post May 4 2009, 12:07 PM
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post May 4 2009, 12:14 PM
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Trond this is awesome man, your sense for arrangement is excellent, not to mention mixing. It really shows you invested a lot of time in this, details are incredible. I'm glad I can hear this song and recognize your style wink.gif
Vocals would sound awesome on this indeed smile.gif

Keep rocking mate, can't wait to hear the whole song.


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post May 4 2009, 02:52 PM
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that's fantastic, congrats!
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post May 4 2009, 03:42 PM
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Metals not my thing mate but i really liked it, it seemed to have a lot of different elements in there and not just boring heavy riffs, cool mate!
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post May 4 2009, 07:27 PM
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That is some excellent work here. I´m specially impressed by the mixing, that´s top quality. smile.gif

That´s a complicated song, must have taken days to do this. Outstanding work, looking forward to hear the final product. smile.gif





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post May 4 2009, 09:09 PM
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Great, piano fits really well.


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post May 4 2009, 11:27 PM
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Thanks guys for all the nice comments! biggrin.gif

QUOTE (skennington @ May 4 2009, 02:37 AM) *
Dude, this is great man. Very main stream and quite ready for airplay IMO. The piano definitely will show a vocalist what your thoughts are here. Have you written any lyrics at all for it?


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Nope, no vocals thought out yet. I'm clueless when it comes to writing down words. smile.gif

QUOTE (Rated Htr @ May 4 2009, 11:38 AM) *
Great Trond!!! Really Great! biggrin.gif

The Piano also adds a nice touch, maybe you should add vocals and leave it as well, just my two cents wink.gif


Thanks smile.gif Yea, i might put the piano inn fulltime. Just have to do some alterations to make it flow better.


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post May 4 2009, 11:30 PM
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Great job man! The intro gave me chills. How did you right this piece?


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post May 5 2009, 12:26 AM
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This is so good it offends me! mad.gif


But seriously I love the riffs, I can imagine a bruce dickinson style voice over this and it sounds great.
It may be simplified, but its damn epic man, great tune!
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post May 5 2009, 12:52 AM
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I think i'm actually going to try writing some lyrics for this one....
I just got an idea for a concept album, and it's about this guy facing eternity in hell and reflecting back on all the choices and things he did to end up there. Well, thats atleast the first initial idea smile.gif


QUOTE (TreyDeschamp @ May 5 2009, 12:30 AM) *
Great job man! The intro gave me chills. How did you right this piece?


Thanks! biggrin.gif
I wrote it the same way i do with most of my songs; recording minutes of random improvised playing untill something with potential appears, and then cut away the rest and then build a song around that first good idea.

QUOTE (The Uncreator @ May 5 2009, 01:26 AM) *
This is so good it offends me! mad.gif


But seriously I love the riffs, I can imagine a bruce dickinson style voice over this and it sounds great.
It may be simplified, but its damn epic man, great tune!


Thanks alot biggrin.gif



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QUOTE (Trond Vold @ May 4 2009, 07:52 PM) *
I think i'm actually going to try writing some lyrics for this one....
I just got an idea for a concept album, and it's about this guy facing eternity in hell and reflecting back on all the choices and things he did to end up there. Well, thats atleast the first initial idea smile.gif


Choices in life and their consequences, what a cool concept Trond. cool.gif


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