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> Coffeeman - Slow Rock Solo, My take on Emir Lesson
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post May 7 2009, 04:31 AM
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Hey guys,

here is the original lesson

I used my fender strat directly to the PC through a Line 6 Toneport UX1.

Here is my take:



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post May 7 2009, 09:12 AM
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Rhythm placement - 3,8
Cleanness - 3,9
Feel - 3,9
Posture - 4,3
Sound - 4,1

Not bad at all. There are some issues I want to point out. First, 0:14-0:18 lick is totally displaced. This is the reason you have a low mark for the rhythm placement. Some fast slides were not present at all. That gives stylistical points but you didn't play any of those. The arpeggio was good and I liked your vibrato. There were other things I liked but this can be improved a lot in general even though this take still works as it is.


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post May 7 2009, 11:57 AM
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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 4,5
Sound - 4,5

As Emir said, you could easily improve rhythm placement.
Great fell & great job on this lesson.


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post May 7 2009, 07:03 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3.8
Cleanness - 3.9
Feel - 4.3
Posture - 4
Sound - 4

Everything was very solid, and as everybody said, I think rhythm placement could be a bit better, but all in all nicely done! smile.gif


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post May 7 2009, 10:50 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3.5
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 4
Posture - 4.5
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post May 8 2009, 12:21 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3,7
Cleanness - 4
Feel - 3,8
Posture - 4
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Issue with rhythmic is what popped out mostly for me, smile.gif



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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 4
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Work on rhythm placement and it will be awesome !


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post May 9 2009, 03:37 PM
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81.53% on this lesson coffeeman. (pass)


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