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> My First Song (that I Can Semi-proudly Upload), I finally finished a tab that i can seriously ask a peer review for
oreomix93
post May 11 2009, 03:54 AM
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I could really use suggestions and criticism. Its my first not-bad one so if you can...be gentle lol

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post May 13 2009, 03:39 AM
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Wasnt too bad.

Very Maiden-Ish.

Nice first song smile.gif


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post May 13 2009, 01:19 PM
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I liked it smile.gif
Well done and congratulations!
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post May 13 2009, 03:06 PM
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I really liked it, great job!
It would be really cool to hear it recorded, at least with real guitars.


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post May 13 2009, 09:15 PM
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very cool composition man! keep the great work coming.
+1 to see this song recorded smile.gif


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post May 15 2009, 03:38 PM
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wow mate.. great song I love it_ REC REC REC


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post May 16 2009, 05:09 PM
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I would record it but my parents just took away my guitar for a month... sad.gif


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post May 16 2009, 05:36 PM
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QUOTE (oreomix93 @ May 16 2009, 06:09 PM) *
I would record it but my parents just took away my guitar for a month... sad.gif


... blink.gif Man that's harsh! ohmy.gif mad.gif I feel sorry for you sad.gif

Anyway, sounds good man wink.gif +1 on Maiden smile.gif I would also like to hear this recorded when you get your guitar back smile.gif
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post May 16 2009, 07:18 PM
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Wow, you wrote everything in GP, that is so pro. I like the first part more, fantastic application of empty strings! I mean, it will sound different played with pick...

I like the word half-proudly smile.gif
full-proudly is better though....

this is one of better compositions here on upload forum, very very mature, you really don't waste single notes, drums are wonderful, and that contrast silent-loud is good, that is also part of composition, continue working on this, record with live instruments, add vst and stuff, and you can proudly put it on CD, no kidding...


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post May 18 2009, 09:05 PM
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Wow, guys i dont even know what to say. Thanks so much! biggrin.gif


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