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post May 13 2009, 11:53 PM
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One take I did for the Mayones Guitar Competition



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post May 14 2009, 10:00 AM
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Hey Filipe! I like the phrasing a lot, but your vibrato and tone need work. Maybe a bit more mids? I'm not sure. tongue.gif Overall good job, but work on those too smile.gif

EDIT: maybe you could switch pickups by the way! Like in the start use the neck and later on the bridge?

EDIT 2: I don't know if you are able to shred or use fast legato, but I would try that at the end to have a climax. smile.gif

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post May 14 2009, 10:11 AM
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I need to change strings...Doing vibrato now goes alot out of tune...atleast I thought so...The tone I might change...Just wanted to experiment...Yeah, I can shred a bit, thanks for the suggestion smile.gif


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post May 15 2009, 09:12 PM
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post May 16 2009, 06:34 PM
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Hey ! Very nice melody ! You seem to have a quite developed technique, so you should as SonofDestiny said try to put in some shredding parts. Maybe some legato-runs or small arpeggios could work ? Your choice, but you should try to make the song a bit richer technically smile.gif

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quite melodic, add some more shred!


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post May 17 2009, 12:46 PM
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Thanks Guys, Maybe I'll do a new take today smile.gif


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post May 17 2009, 01:06 PM
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I like your melody line mate, but i think the difficulty needs to be upped a bit, that will be one tough competition for sure!!
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post May 17 2009, 05:05 PM
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We want the final version Filipe!!


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post May 18 2009, 11:02 PM
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Cool stuff.

I´ll make a take if i have some time, it´s only due to 1st of july right?


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post May 19 2009, 08:55 PM
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Nice man, I didnt mind your tone. It reminds me a bit of mine laugh.gif .


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