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> Mayones Competition - My Take, Well just bloopers for now but you should get a picture :)
Jakub Luptovec
post May 15 2009, 02:23 PM
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So this is my take, played on my friends guitar (I will post the real take as soon as I get my guitar back). I composed it just by improvising. Check especially the last take (6:20 I guess), since its generally without mistake - I just messed up the totally last, easiest slided note biggrin.gif



Any comments on feeling, posture, note choice and techniques appreciated smile.gif Needless to say, I would really like to win that competition tongue.gif

EDIT: Yes I know the first sweeped arpeggio should be a bit longer smile.gif The pause is awkward there

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post May 15 2009, 03:04 PM
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Pretty cool Jakub! I would like to have heard your guitar a bit better though and without the damper, I think the notes would have more clarity. Just my opinion of course, good luck in the competition! smile.gif


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post May 15 2009, 03:18 PM
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QUOTE (skennington @ May 15 2009, 04:04 PM) *
Pretty cool Jakub! I would like to have heard your guitar a bit better though and without the damper, I think the notes would have more clarity. Just my opinion of course, good luck in the competition! smile.gif


I will. I am just not used on his shorter neck and longer frets so I mess up much more on his guitar (its el cheapo ashton for 200$ with amp..) I agree the damper kills the sustain and ringing a bit tho! smile.gif


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post May 15 2009, 03:27 PM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ May 15 2009, 09:23 AM) *
So this is my take, played on my friends guitar (I will post the real take as soon as I get my guitar back). I composed it just by improvising. Check especially the last take (6:20 I guess), since its generally without mistake - I just messed up the totally last, easiest slided note biggrin.gif



Any comments on feeling, posture, note choice and techniques appreciated smile.gif Needless to say, I would really like to win that competition tongue.gif

EDIT: Yes I know the first sweeped arpeggio should be a bit longer smile.gif The pause is awkward there


Haha!
I like the comments you put on the video.
There are some cool ideas in there!
Good luck with the contest!!!


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post May 15 2009, 03:29 PM
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You must control a bit your bends,and try to obtain a good sound.good luck in the competition! wink.gif


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post May 15 2009, 03:57 PM
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By the way, what do you use to sync the audio and video? Cos I wanted to record the sound with pod and then add the sound, but in WMM it was impossible to make match


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post May 15 2009, 03:57 PM
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Nice ideas so far Jakub,
try with more melody and without dampener,
best of luck in the competition. smile.gif


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post May 15 2009, 04:02 PM
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QUOTE (Muris Varajic @ May 15 2009, 04:57 PM) *
Nice ideas so far Jakub,
try with more melody and without dampener,
best of luck in the competition. smile.gif


Regarding that melody, any specific place that you would improve?


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post May 15 2009, 04:10 PM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ May 15 2009, 10:57 AM) *
By the way, what do you use to sync the audio and video? Cos I wanted to record the sound with pod and then add the sound, but in WMM it was impossible to make match



In WMM, get the backing and lead tracks as close as possible, then decide which track you want to move and click it to highlight. At the top of the page, click "clip", in the drop down, you will see "nudge left or right". You may have to do this several times but you can sync the tracks this way.


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post May 15 2009, 04:12 PM
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QUOTE (skennington @ May 15 2009, 05:10 PM) *
In WMM, get the backing and lead tracks as close as possible, then decide which track you want to move and click it to highlight. At the top of the page, click "clip", in the drop down, you will see "nudge left or right". You may have to do this several times but you can sync the tracks this way.


Ah thanks. because when moving it by dragging, it always jumps by half second and thats too big interval:)


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post May 15 2009, 04:15 PM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ May 15 2009, 11:12 AM) *
Ah thanks. because when moving it by dragging, it always jumps by half second and thats too big interval:)


Yep, using the "nudge" is the only way to sync the tracks perfectly. smile.gif


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post May 15 2009, 04:29 PM
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Cool playing Jakub , good luck at the competition man !


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post May 15 2009, 05:35 PM
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Nice playing mate, almost soulful?!? if you know what i mean tongue.gif .

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post May 15 2009, 06:15 PM
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QUOTE (sted @ May 15 2009, 06:35 PM) *
Nice playing mate, almost soulful?!? if you know what i mean tongue.gif .

Good luck in the comp!


Well I tried to feel the music and enjoy the playing as much as I could! (I always do:)) Because it says in the rules that the feeling and sound is what matters the most in this competition:) Thats why I didnt just shred the solo through and through biggrin.gif


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post May 15 2009, 06:47 PM
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post May 15 2009, 07:50 PM
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post May 15 2009, 09:18 PM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ May 15 2009, 05:02 PM) *
Regarding that melody, any specific place that you would improve?


I meant generaly the melody, you probably played slower to be more melodic
and it does help to get some kind of a melody going
but I would rather sing something over backing and try to catch
few lines and then adapt those to your playing,
our voices are ultimate industry for uber melodic lines. wink.gif


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post May 15 2009, 09:59 PM
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Ohh.. now thats an advice from guitar god:) Will do, thanks smile.gif

And yes, my idea was to make it melodic, yet interesting and technically challnging (thus those sweeps and tapping in the end). I just wanted to show them I've got it all - even tho I dont tongue.gif

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post May 15 2009, 10:09 PM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ May 15 2009, 10:59 PM) *
And yes, my idea was to make it melodic, yet interesting and technically challnging (thus those sweeps and tapping in the end). I just wanted to show them I've got it all - even tho I dont tongue.gif


Guy who posted competition said that he's looking for feel, melody etc.
Perhaps you don't need any sweeps and taps for this one, dunno. smile.gif


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post May 15 2009, 10:26 PM
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Yes I know... Maybe you are right.. but its just my inner feeling that kickass solo needs to have some shredding part.. do you think I should make it all just melodical? Your opinion has big weight for me so please be honest smile.gif If you think its bad, say it, I just want to show them the best out of me:)


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