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> Mayones Competition - My Take, Well just bloopers for now but you should get a picture :)
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post May 15 2009, 11:46 PM
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QUOTE (Jakub Luptovec @ May 15 2009, 11:26 PM) *
Yes I know... Maybe you are right.. but its just my inner feeling that kickass solo needs to have some shredding part.. do you think I should make it all just melodical? Your opinion has big weight for me so please be honest smile.gif If you think its bad, say it, I just want to show them the best out of me:)

It's not on me to decide or say if it's bad
but I would surely add more melodic stuff, no doubt. smile.gif


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post May 16 2009, 01:30 AM
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that is good, some shredding parts are off, melody and feeling are great!

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post May 16 2009, 11:23 AM
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Wow, this was a really nice composition ! The beginning sounds a bit like the first heavy part in Afraid to Shoot Strangers - Iron Maiden. Very well played, especially near the end smile.gif I also found your honest but modest comments popping up very funny ! biggrin.gif

Rock on, Jakub, and good the best of luck with your competition ! smile.gif

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post May 16 2009, 01:04 PM
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Thank you very VERY much guys, for your support and feedback:) You are the best:) I will haggle and toogle and play with it maybe a lil' as muris recommended, but generally will try to stay at this concept:)

Vasilije: Yea I know:D Especially that sweeps are out at times, ending half a bar earlier and then I had to wait for next beat.. but truth be told I was surprised I did even this on that strat:D Cant wait for monday, when my guitar comes back:)

Alex93: Well I can just definietly tell, I wasnt inspired by I.M. since I dont listen to them:)
Thank you milion times for that feedback:D It really made my day - and made me practice even more biggrin.gif

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