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Niels_r
post May 18 2009, 11:06 PM
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Hello,

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Im been playing guitar for about a year, but only learning by myself and the internet, so i should probably be better by now. Began guitar proing 2 months ago so im still quite new at that too.

This is my first best song ( but that might not do it good wink.gif ) and i would like some critique ohmy.gif

Im bit afraid of it being to boring, og and lacking of interesting sounds

The title of the song... well, it had to have a name right? no real reason for it tongue.gif

btw, this definetly sounds best with RSE

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post May 19 2009, 06:38 AM
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Phoe! Looks complicated:D VIolin etc.... it sound's really cool. I'm a Guitar Pro composer nut...


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Niels_r
post May 20 2009, 11:41 PM
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thanks smile.gif though im thinking about removing the violin tongue.gif
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post May 21 2009, 01:44 AM
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I liked that riff that repeats all the time. I just can't imagine what your initial idea was. Are there any lyrics? Instrumental like this doesn't tell me much as most of it just repeats without some logical structure like : recognizable verse, chorus, bridge etc... Anyway this is good job if you only started 2 months ago with this program.


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post May 21 2009, 06:03 PM
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well... I honestly think thats why i dont quite know how i create that structure... but i guess that something i should look into wink.gif

And lyrics.. Well yes, i have some thoughts about lyrics but havent written anything yet
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