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post May 28 2009, 03:54 PM
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Please give me some feedback!

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post May 28 2009, 04:38 PM
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Nice playing. You already know that I like watching you playing, so I won´t repeat myself. Btw, I loved the background. laugh.gif
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post May 28 2009, 04:58 PM
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Thanks alot man!
Yeah, my son is dancing , lol biggrin.gif
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post May 28 2009, 05:01 PM
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QUOTE (kjutte @ May 28 2009, 05:58 PM) *
Thanks alot man!
Yeah, my son is dancing , lol biggrin.gif

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Hey, what about another jam session? I´ve got some time. smile.gif Maybe this evening?
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post May 28 2009, 05:09 PM
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QUOTE (Tolek @ May 28 2009, 06:01 PM) *
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Hey, what about another jam session? I´ve got some time. smile.gif Maybe this evening?


Sure man. Going to a meeting now, but when I get home, and if wife isn't too crazy (she's always a little crazy.) we'll share some licks!
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post May 28 2009, 05:14 PM
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QUOTE (kjutte @ May 28 2009, 06:09 PM) *
Sure man. Going to a meeting now, but when I get home, and if wife isn't too crazy (she's always a little crazy.) we'll share some licks!

Great! smile.gif I´ll keep the computer free for this evening. Just let me now on MSN when you´re home. Or if I´m not online, write a message in this topic. smile.gif
See ya!
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post May 28 2009, 05:19 PM
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Congrats for your playing man! Your vibrato sounds great and the fast licks are played perfect. I like the mix of bluesy licks with some shreding. Your tone is also very good. The onlñy thing that doesn't convince me is the last note that you play. It seams like if the solo doesn't resolve.

BTW you are a really good player! smile.gif


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post May 28 2009, 06:05 PM
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The accuracy is good, the timing is good, the transition between licks could be a little better. I think that the sliding down the neck gets a little too repetive. Also, every phrase except the sweep picking arpeggio starts on the first beat. I dislike that because it sounds like your hopping between exercises, I recommend you to listen to Jeff Beck a little.

But all in all it was a good solo.


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post May 28 2009, 07:31 PM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ May 28 2009, 06:19 PM) *
It seams like if the solo doesn't resolve.


The backing doesn't resolve, actually. If you listen closely, you'll hear that the backing fades out. Maybe I should fade the guitar more also?

Either way, thanks alot for the nice words!

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The accuracy is good, the timing is good, the transition between licks could be a little better. I think that the sliding down the neck gets a little too repetive. Also, every phrase except the sweep picking arpeggio starts on the first beat. I dislike that because it sounds like your hopping between exercises, I recommend you to listen to Jeff Beck a little.

But all in all it was a good solo.


I'll try to work on that!
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post May 29 2009, 01:41 AM
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Nice job man! I like the definition in your AP lick towards the end, however at the end of the piece that last bend wasn't really on pitch. Something wasn't right there for me but that might just be my ear laugh.gif biggrin.gif

Great job, I really liked it! smile.gif


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post May 29 2009, 03:09 AM
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Very tasteful, good tone, and excellent playing. Your phrasing was very nice as well.
Good luck!

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post May 29 2009, 07:06 AM
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QUOTE (kjutte @ May 28 2009, 08:31 PM) *
I'll try to work on that!


I'm glad that you found my advice helpful. I wish you the best of luck in this competition.

-EDIT- One more thing kjutte. You're not a lefty are you? Because the video makes it look like that. You need to specify that so that when you win the guitar, you won't win a lefty version tongue.gif

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post May 29 2009, 08:03 AM
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QUOTE (UncleSkillet @ May 29 2009, 02:41 AM) *
Nice job man! I like the definition in your AP lick towards the end, however at the end of the piece that last bend wasn't really on pitch. Something wasn't right there for me but that might just be my ear laugh.gif biggrin.gif


Thanks man. It's in pitch, but doesn't resolve to rootnote. The reason is that the backing doesn't resolve, but I didn't realize it was this obvious. I guess I will reshoot it, eventually!
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