Revamped And Redone Song Options

[The Uncreator]

An older song I uploaded, The new one has a much more aggressive vocal attack, Some new solos, And just better performances. I hope you all like.

Please comment, give advice, on any aspect of the song or mix



Lyrics for you as well


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A mind intrigued by complexity
A mind built for the ultimate challenge
He will stop at nothing to know its secret
What lies at the top of the spire

Its intelligence a disturbing presence
Its taste for blood unsettling
A mathematical prowess matched by no being
Its puzzle reserved for only the most arcane thinker
Misjudgment punished, Ignorance admonished

I rise to this challenge
I will undermine the alien sentience
My mind and body altered to a hideous state
Fusion of man and machine

My brain undergoes its metamorphosis
My eyes see shapes where there once was none
Thinking in equations and solutions
I notice not what I have become

A voice whispers, Into my sensors
On your shoulders be this burden

He has defied even the allure of sleep
Resorting to a state of continued awareness
Machines calculate and balance a toxic equation

His body has defied even the hand of death
Replace, replicate, regenerate, manipulate
By all means he will conquer this spire

A man unrecognizable
Beneath a veil of machines
His humanity lost
Somewhere amongst
His desire to succeed
A purpose unclear
A will obscured
His mind not what we knew
His persona erased
Beneath a veil of machines

Diamond Dog!

A mind intrigued by complexity
A mind built for the ultimate challenge
He will stop at nothing to know its secret
What lies at the top of the spire

Its intelligence a disturbing presence
Its taste for blood unsettling
A mathematical prowess matched by no being
Its puzzle reserved for only the most arcane thinker
Misjudgment punished, Ignorance admonished

Severed limbs serve only as a mental marker
Of where he left his problems unsolved
I walk away in a tearful stride
Leaving behind what I loved to the spire

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[superize]

Great song

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[Ivan Milenkovic]

That sounds very good and the lyrics are interesting as well!

I specially liked the clean break part in the middle of the song, and that clean galloping section in the end of that part, very cool!

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[The Uncreator]

Thanks, Im glad you guys enjoyed it. I like the clean gallop as well, I was listening to some Coheed And Cambria when I got the idea.

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