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> Cascading Mirrors The First Bit Anyway, critque please
Bondy
post Aug 5 2009, 08:57 PM
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I know this is a rough and i messed up the opening riff plus some other mistakes but i thought i would upload to get some constructive criticism. Also this is the first time i used cubase so tips for that would come in handy

I used my new guitar(I will post pics in another thead soon) which has no floyd if anyone wonders why i did not use it for the one part


Attached File  cascading_mirrors_first_mix.mp3 ( 1.92MB ) Number of downloads: 225


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post Aug 5 2009, 09:24 PM
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That was awsome Bondy, your playing has really come on well, good job biggrin.gif


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post Aug 5 2009, 09:26 PM
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QUOTE (mattacuk @ Aug 5 2009, 09:24 PM) *
That was awsome Bondy, your playing has really come on well, good job biggrin.gif



Wow thanks matt that means alot to me smile.gif smile.gif


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Muris Varajic
post Aug 5 2009, 09:32 PM
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There are some problems with intro delay part,
I guess it was delay that confused you so you went
too much ahead of the BT.
You sure you used correct timing for delay btw,
seems like it was faster?
Rest of it was pretty descent tho,
needs some work but you'll get there in a sec. smile.gif


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post Aug 7 2009, 04:50 PM
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You went a little ahead of the backing track in the first part and went into counter beat at the end. But the overall sound, rhythm playing (afterwards) and lead playing is very good and clean. Great job mate smile.gif


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